10 Dangerous ideas

DangerousAny idea can lead to terrible actions, misunderstandings, unintended consequences. But some ideas seem especially dangerous on their face, not necessarily because they are wrong, not just because they are big ideas, not because acting on them would be imprudent, but because, knowing what we do about human nature, it’s very likely that such ideas will end up harming rather than helping people. These ideas are not framed as proposals for what should or should not be done. They are simply ideas, beliefs not always fully articulated, that people might act on or have already. I’ll elaborate these dangerous ideas as time permits.

1. Humans can withstand or control natural phenomena, such as climate change, pandemics, water and food shortages, population density, and the human genome. It’s a dangerous idea because when it’s wrong, the consequences are catastrophic.

2. The main meaning, or purpose, of life is reproduction. That’s a dangerous idea that could destroy the earth, and in its implications, reaches into every facet of life.

3. Science is a highly specialized method of conversation by which a culture comes to consensus about what is true. Science thus has no privileged access to truth. The idea is dangerous for rejecting a critical myth that makes modern society possible.

4. The idea that there is no topic that cannot, in principle, be investigated by science, and that there is no domain where science is impotent, is dangerous because of what it omits from inquiry.

5. The confusion, or conflation, of church doctrines, scriptures, and the pronouncements of religious leaders, with divine revelation, is extremely dangerous for not being susceptible to discussion.

6. Many people believe that virtue, freedom and happiness are entwined with the economics of wealth and consumption. It is a dangerous and pervasive idea that may be impossible to shake because of the Fundamental Attribution Error.

7.  Rule by mob is a terrible way to govern, even if it is better than any other method. Still, because it is mob rule, democracy is a very dangerous idea.

8. Communism is dangerous because its fundamental sentiments are egalitarian and utopian, and that makes it attractive to people of good will. What makes it dangerous is that it fails to accommodate intractable human greed, so inevitably degenerates into totalitarianism.

9. Tribalism is dangerous because of its inevitable tendency to alienate, then denigrate and exploit anyone not a member of the tribe, whether the tribe is a family, a club, an ethnic or economic group, or a nation.

10. Individualism is dangerous when understood absolutely, as it often is, to mean that each person is, or should be, a self-sufficient being. The idea is dangerous because it severely limits human potential.

Marquez – One Hundred Years of Solitude

100 Years of solitudeMagical Story of Humanity

Marquez, Gabriel Garcia (1970). One Hundred Years of Solitude. New York: Harper and Row.

It’s difficult to have an opinion about a book that is universally revered as one of the greatest novels of all time, by a Nobel Prize winner who single-handedly created a genre, “magical realism.”  But I do.  There is a lot to like about this novel, but for me it was tedious: it’s repetitive and goes on far too long.

The time frame of the story really is 100 years, so four or five generations of an ever-branching family move across the pages. Many have confusingly similar names, and the passage of time is not always marked clearly, and kinship relations are always more important to a family than to any outsider, so it is nearly impossible to keep track of the cast. Helpfully, there is a genealogy tree at the front of the book.

The blurring of characters is no mistake. They are partially themselves, but also tokens, standing for Everyman and Everywoman, the parade of humanity over history, particularly, the evolution of Columbian society since its independence from Spain in the early 1800s. Characters who are generations apart act and think much as their forebears did, making the same mistakes, encountering the same joys and tragedies, even while the world around them moves inexorably from an idyllic jungle village  to modern complexity. That conveys a kind of fatalism: The more things change, the more they stay the same.

The main attraction of the book is the narrator, a storyteller who has nonjudgmental sympathy for the characters no matter how strangely they behave, yet one who has opinions and observations about them, explaining as if he had been there (which, as omniscient narrator, he was, of course), what was going on and why things developed as they did.

When odd, “magical” things happen, they are reported in the same matter-of-fact tone as the rest of the story. Women fly past a window riding on magic carpets. Seems bizarre, but the narrator explains that they got the carpets from some traveling Arab salesmen who were passing through, and the Arabs always want to trade for macaw parrots, so the flying carpets were a fair exchange. Well, I guess that makes sense!  Likewise, when an unwanted priest comes to town, he demonstrates his seriousness by levitating six inches off the ground, impressing everyone. Yet there is a simple explanation. He drinks a big mug of hot chocolate before his performance, and through the power of transmutation of chocolate, is able to levitate. So there you go.

The magical realism component of the book is humorous and very skillfully woven into the fabric of the story, not meant to pop out of the narration. Magical elements arise from situations that inherently support them, such encounters with exotic Arab traders, strange alchemical experiments, gypsy carnivals, memory loss, and so on. It’s a pleasure to watch the author work that theme in ways that keep surprising you.

And then you come across stunningly original sentences that stop you in your tracks: “He had wept in his mother’s womb and he’d been born with his eyes open.”  “They were suffocated by the mingled breath of manure and sandals that the crowd exhaled.” Such delights keep the pages turning.

There is much more to praise, but on the down side, it is 500 pages of claustrophobic family drama. There is no plot to speak of, just an endless series of small scenes involving births, deaths, weddings, funerals, sex, suicide, madness, children, parents, food, disease, decay, poverty, wealth, wars, weather, feuds, betrayals, reunions, on and on forever. It is the human story, charmingly written.

McInerny – Bright Lights, Big City

Bright lights big citySecond-Person in New York

McInerney, Jay (1984). Bright Lights, Big City. New York: Vintage.

This short (182 pp) novel of 1980’s New York City is widely praised as having nailed that period and place.  I don’t know – I wasn’t there, but if accurate, the town was awash in cocaine.

The main character, an unnamed young man, works a drudge job at a magazine where the boss hates him. By night, he prowls bars and clubs, hanging out with his friends, drinking and snorting coke, looking for love, or at least sex. He was recently divorced by his wife, a fashion model he “discovered” in Kansas and brought to the city, so he is chronically depressed, amotivational, and directionless. After a major screw-up at work, he gets fired. That’s it. Oh yeah, and he loves his mother.

There is no plot, just a series of scenes about this fellow, addressed as “you” by the second-person narrator. That kind of narration is off-putting, and compared to first-person, seriously distances the reader from the character, limiting access to his thoughts, but maybe that was a good choice for a character who is hollow inside.

The character’s ennui is reminiscent of Walker Percy’s main character in The Moviegoer, but there was a lot more story in that book. McInerney’s character is a cipher and there’s no plot, so what do we have? Great writing. Despite the obnoxious second-person voice, the language is sophisticated, spare, well-observed, and very funny. The humor is wry and subtle, not the knee-slapping kind.

It’s a quick read and an easy page-turner because of the fine writing, which reminds me of the “New York School,” and Frank O’Hara’s prose poetry of the 1950’s – quite enjoyable, once you accept it on its own terms.

Nietzsche – Birth of Tragedy

Birth of Tragedy“Nothing can be meaningfully affirmed.” – Friedrich Nietzsche

Geuss, Raymond, &Speirs, Ronald (Eds.) (1999). Friedrich Nietzsche: The Birth of Tragedy and Other Writings. Cambridge, U.K.: Cambridge University Press.

The main Nietzschean text presented in this book is The Birth of Tragedy Out of the Spirit of Music, published in 1872.  The “other writings” are an updated forward Nietzsche wrote for Birth of Tragedy a dozen years after its initial publication, and two short essays, “The Dionysiac World View,” and “On Truth and Lying in a Non-Moral Sense.”  I’ll confine my review to The Birth of Tragedy. (Blame the length of the review on Nietzsche’s dense prose, not me). 

Birth of Tragedy is a sprawling essay of 100 pages, with extremely dense ideas ranging across many subjects, not always presented in order. Nietzsche was only 28 years old when he wrote it, so its organization, or lack of it, may give us some insight into the workings of his young mind. However, even at that young age, Nietzsche was a well-known scholar, an expert in philology, the intersection of linguistics and history. Suffice it to say that he read Sophocles and Plato in the original ancient Greek.

The difficulty, and pleasure, of reading the essay is its provocation at almost every turn. It is un-skimmable. Almost every paragraph, every sentence, must be parsed, processed, and evaluated. I will paraphrase, rather than quote Nietzsche’s main ideas, and I will also provide, [in brackets] my reactions to some of them, in order to show how an active reader can extract the latent value of Nietzsche’s sometimes cryptic prose. It goes without saying, I may have completely missed Nietzsche’s meaning on any topic!

Pessimism

Nietzsche writes that the ancient Greek tragedians were fundamentally pessimists because they were obsessed with a life guided by pursuit of knowledge, and that pursuit can only end in tragedy, as demonstrated by Sophocles’ great play, Oedipus Rex.

If you pursue knowledge, as Oedipus did, and as Socrates advocated, it will surely end in grief, because it’s a fool’s errand. Why? Because there is no knowledge worth having. All of life is illusion, and at the end of it, you die anyway. The certainty of your death means no knowledge can be meaningful, so death undercuts the possibility of optimism about life. So if the Greeks pursued knowledge, they were necessarily pessimists.

Nietzsche tells the apocryphal story of an ancient oracle’s teaching (p. 23).

Question: O wise one. What is best for man?

Answer: Not to have been born. To be nothing. Second best: die soon.

[I disagree for three reasons:

1. An individual transcends death through community participation, such as in arts, science, history, and all aspects of civilization. Those have a much longer lifespan than any individual, so to the extent that the individual partakes of them, the individual’s knowledge is immortal and optimism is possible. Nietzsche makes the fundamental error of presupposing that individuals are absolute monads.

2. An individual transcends individuality through intersubjectivity, a type of deep empathy. One partakes of other individuals (the community), and in doing so, becomes relatively immortal. 

3. Self-knowledge reveals the telos, which is a self-justifying pleasure despite death. ]

There are two kinds of pessimism, Nietzsche writes:

1. The pessimism of weakness: What’s the use: we’re all gonna die.

2. The pessimism of strength:  Enjoy pleasure while you can, before you die.

[His epicurean strong pessimism is similar to my objection #3 above, though probably for different reasons.  I also note that Nietzsche’s father died when he was only 5. Perhaps that affected his view of life more than he acknowledges.]

Individualism

Nietzsche says that individuality is a delusion so strong, you cannot hope to shake it off. He says the illusion of individuality is pervasive and unshakeable, so you must either accept that illusion, and live a lie, or die. No other choices.

[I agree about the delusion, but probably for different reasons. I say individuality is a delusion borne of socially constructed ego, guaranteed by biological, spatiotemporal uniqueness, as described in my ebook, The Purpose of the Body. 

I suspect the delusion of individuality has a different meaning for Nietzsche. He seems to believe that “life” is constituted of dialectally interacting cosmic forces of chaos and order. (He was very much influenced by the pre-Socratic, Heraclitus). Each person is a manifestation of those eternal forces, but we come to believe in our own individualism instead of appreciating our true nature as non-individual, swirling forces of chaos.

I don’t subscribe to any sort of supernaturalism. I’m totally committed to humanism and naturalism. If there are great cosmic forces behind the appearance of individuality, Nietzsche would have to make the case for that, which he attempts to do in this book. But I read those forces of being, as Freud did, as manifestations of individuality, not as superhuman forces.]

Evil

Why is there evil?  This is the problem of theodicy: how can life be good when there is such evil in the world?   Nietzsche gives three answers:

a. Evil is necessary for free will to be expressed by resisting evil, and free will is good. Therefore evil is necessary for there to be good;

b. Evil is necessary for good to flourish in the long run;

c. There is evil because the gods are evil (the Olympian gods of the ancient Greeks),  and they’re evil because they live as men do (only immortally), and that’s because the Greeks made them up (unconsciously, by projection). Therefore, the world has evil because the gods are evil, and the gods are evil because man is evil.

[Answers a and b are the same ones given by John Milton in Paradise Lost, and are highly arguable. Nietzsche absolutely nails the solution in his answer c, however, and this hoary problem is henceforth a non-problem.]

Christianity

Nietzsche argues that Christianity is hostile to life. Why? Because it looks to “the other world,” the so-called “hereafter.”  For Christianity, life is “immoral” and we are all horrible sinners. The afterlife is the good stuff.

Furthermore, Nietzsche says, the impulse to live is a lust for life and sensuality, but Christianity abjures lust. Christianity desires above all, “rest” as on the Sabbath. It desires stasis, rest, eternity, and nothingness. In that, Christianity is nihilistic.  Christian absolutism thus betrays a secret instinct for the annihilation of life.

[I have to agree with Nietzsche on this point. Christianity seems anti-life, and pro-death, pro-heaven. Note that Nietzsche was the son of a preacher, and studied Lutheran theology himself, so he writes from some knowledge.]

Nietzsche also accuses Christianity of being against art. The reasoning is that art is greater than morality because the world is only justified by aesthetic experience. Is a flower good or evil?  The question makes no sense. The world is just the world, neither good nor bad. It is what it is. A flower can be beautiful, but not good or evil.

Art, which represents the world, is therefore prior to morality. But if morality is absolute, as Christians say (the word of God), art is without meaning.

[This is the exact reasoning Plato used, in The Republic, to argue that no poets would be allowed in the utopia, because poetry is nothing but lies. The world is what it is, so why do you need a poet to tell you it’s some other way?]

Finishing Nietzsche’s logic, art is the only meaning in life, because death undercuts all meaning except aesthetics.  If art has meaning, Christianity is wrong about absolute morality.

Knowledge

Knowledge is useless, Nietzsche writes, and pursuit of it is futile. Why? Because you’re going to die anyway, all your knowledge is useless in the face of death.

[The strength of this argument requires that you assume that individuals  are monads. I already argued that If a person lives in a community, knowledge can benefit those who survive you, such as in the discovery of insulin or penicillin. More abstractly, philosophical knowledge can do the same, such as articulation of human rights, or government by constitution. All the framers of the U.S. Constitution are long dead. Was their effort futile? Should they have danced instead? If you omit the fact that individuals are embedded in community, many errors follow.

Interestingly, Milton makes a similar argument in Paradise Lost: : Don’t waste your time in philosophical speculation because your time is limited. Spend it obeying God, to assure the safety of soul when you do die. That’s what matters. But while Milton’s argument was practical, Nietzsche’s is doctrinal.]

Nietzsche draws on the tradition of ancient Greek tragedy to make his case that pursuit of knowledge is not only futile, it is sinful. The sin is hubris, offending the gods by trying to acquire the knowledge that only the gods possess (e.g., the knowledge of good and evil). The ancient Greeks were obsessed by hubris (i.e., Oedipus Rex).

[Why is hubris a sin? I think it’s because the patriarchy of religion requires obedience above all. Obedience is conformance to the will of another instead of oneself. It is therefore willful abdication of personal intentionality, not merely behavioral conformance. It is specifically abandonment of free will, and abdication of personal agency, which the gods (the patriarchy) cannot tolerate. Why not? I think because:

          1. The power-holder enjoys power, which implies self-transcendence and personal self-aggrandizement. Hubris is therefore small-minded egotism masquerading as moral principle.

          2. Your reason is inadequate and will lead only to error. The gods’ knowledge is superior, so obey it for your own good. That sounds reasonable, until you realize it is a self-refuting argument. Who would propose this argument and know it to be true? No human possibly could, because it states that human reason is inherently flawed. Humans do not understand the mind of god, by definition. Therefore, this argument must be inadequate. Only god himself could deliver this argument. Unless we believe that church patriarchs, or kings, or any human, is actually god, then this argument cannot be made, in principle.

          3. You are a child and need socialization, which entails obedience. This argument is valid, if one accepts that the gods are parental with respect to humans, and by analogy or osmosis, the religious patriarchy (!) also has a parental responsibility to safeguard anyone who seeks knowledge. If not, this argument is undercut just as #2 was. In fact then, it reduces, as #2 did, to a self-serving faux-moral principle put forth by power-holders.

          4. Obey because the gods will punish the whole community for the transgression of one.  Hence, we cannot allow you to be free. It is too risky. You must obey. Now this argument holds up, and is the only legitimate argument making hubris a sin/crime. It would have been especially true where the tribe was fragile and vulnerable. It justifies intolerance of diversity and creativity, and calls for fear-based conformity. In ancient times there was much to fear: great plagues, weather, foreign invasions and crop failures; all attributed to transgressions against the gods (as in Oedipus Rex).

The logic of #4 is erroneous, (post hoc, ergo propter hoc) but it has justified hubris being a sin since ancient times. However that logic has been known to be invalid since at least the 17th century.  Yet it persists today to justify calls for blind obedience. ]

Science

Nietzsche has two main questions about science. What are its origins, and what is its purpose?  For origins, Nietzsche’s answer is that science is a desperate attempt to cover up meaninglessness of life by pretending to know and understand everything that can be known.

[I can hardly agree, although I do grant that science very often descends into scientism, the doctrine that Nietzsche ascribes to science. Many scientists, especially the more prominent ones who speak to the public, insist that “the universe” is scientifically discoverable. That is nonsense of course, since science has no access to any aspect of the world that is non-material. Still, that is a fault in scientific process and communication, not an explanation of its origins. I say that science originated in a confluence of social and intellectual forces: The Enlightenment, The Reformation, the rise of Humanism, and spread of moveable type; all of which enhanced individualism and the modern mind, which submits to evidence-based reasoning. In many respects, Nietzsche is a premodern mind, in that he seems to have little zeal for presenting evidence for his arguments. ]

As to the purpose of science, Nietzsche says it is a struggle against pessimism and death, under the illusion that everything meaningful can be known.

[I don’t disagree with Nietzsche on this, but I state the purpose in broader terms: Science is a specialized communication method for finding and sustaining social consensus about what constitutes truth.]

Nietzsche accuses science (meaning, for him, empiricism and logical reasoning), of a tyranny that suppressed artistic tragedy. More on that later.

Death

The fact of, and the certainty of death, make life meaningless, according to Nietzsche. There are two pertinent questions. 1. Is that correct?  And 2. If it is, what should we do about it?

Nietzsche is quite sure that life is tragic. He quotes Schopenhauer to the effect that life can give no true satisfaction, and therefore living is not worth the effort, because it all ends in death. Nietzsche says, “[Life] says to us: ‘Take a look! Take a close look! This is your life! This is the hour-hand on the clock of your existence!’” (p.113)

[I disagree, on the grounds that while each biological individual faces oblivion in death, individual life takes place in a community, which survives the individual, providing meaning and relative immortality through community participation. In this way, we do create meaning, even though we know we shall die. Nietzsche assumes absolute individualism, which I call monadism (after Liebniz), which in my view is an error.]

Now, given that life is tragic, what should be done about it, according to Nietzsche? He disagrees with Schopenhauer, who said that the only honest attitude is simple resignation. “Life is meaningless and then you die. Oh, well.”

Nietzsche says no, the correct attitude is laughter and dance, precisely because everything ends in death. He calls this neo-Epicurian attitude, the Dionysian, after the ancient Greek god, Dionysus (Roman: Bacchus). But Nietzsche is not advocating an unsophisticated chant of “Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow you die.” Rather, he says the Dionysian is the core of art: the raw experience prior to individualism which is the source of creativity and will.

The fundamental lust for life and its exuberance is the source of all genuine art, and since the lust for life is indestructible, the production of art is eternal, and the individual can, and should participate in that eternity.

[I have to say, I like that answer, and it is compatible with my own emphasis on intersubjective life in community as the principle means of individual transcendence. Art is a social activity, in my view, whereas Nietzsche says only that it is “pre-individual,” but despite some quibbles like that, I find his idea provocative.]

The Dionysian

The Dionysian experience is that of rapture, or ecstasy; a self-transcendence that leads to the loss of the sense of self, and especially, according to Nietzsche, a temporary loss of individualism.  He gives examples from the Medieval celebrations of St. John’s and St. Vitus dances (which were caused by, or accompanied by, substance intoxication), and of sexual and alcoholic orgies we characterize as bacchanalia.

Some people argue that such wild self-abandon is wrong or at least, unhealthy, but Nietzsche insists otherwise. Dionysian ecstasy is magic, he says. Man is the product of primordial chaos, so to dip into the Dionysian is to return to one’s authentic roots. If that frightens some people, too bad, he says.

Nietzsche does grant that there are good and bad orgies. He disapproves of “barbarian” orgies, which focused on cruelty and bloodshed, which is not Dionysian ecstasy, but just people behaving like animals. The essence of Dionysian ecstasy is loss of self.

So what are we waiting for? Is it party time yet? Again, Nietzsche’s view should not be oversimplified. Yes, you can experience temporary loss of self in the orgasm, in drugs and in alcoholic intoxication, and so on, but you can also experience that ecstasy when you are lost in nature, in art, dance, and above all, in music.

[I would add that we always experience temporary loss of self in intersubjectivity, even in ordinary conversation. In order to understand what another person is saying, what they’re meaning, you necessarily experience a temporary loss of self to put yourself in their point of view. It’s so ordinary and we’re so good at it, we don’t even notice it. The phenomenon is more noticeable when you “lose yourself” in a movie or a novel, for minutes or even hours at a time. The temporary loss of self is what makes those experiences enjoyable.]

One more point: Isn’t it dangerous to lose yourself in Dionysian ecstasy? What if you never “came back?”  Not to worry, says Nietzsche, because the other side of the Dionysian coin is the Apollonian state (After the god, Apollo, god of reason and light). Apollo will save you from permanent loss in the Dionysian. More on that below.

Art as Dialectic

Nietzsche claims (and he would know) that the ancient Greeks distinguished two kinds of artist: the Apollonian sculptor, who shapes form from inchoate clay, and the Dionysian musician, who shapes nothing, but submits to the non-rationality of ecstasy. These two kinds of art arose from fundamentally different, even conflicting motives, the Dionysian and the Apollonian.

[I would say they differ mainly in their appreciation of time. Music is process. Sculpture is product. Are they in conflict?  Yes, because of biology. Time comes from biology, which is a process and we cannot shake off biology so we are necessarily in time and we are processes.  However, conceptualization, the core of reason, comes from social life, and especially from language, and once reified, is outside of time (and outside of biology). We can’t shake that off either: we are linguistic and thinking animals. Therefore, human nature is fundamentally bifurcated, along lines that Nietzsche characterizes. ]

What are these two forces of human nature, the Dionysian and the Apollonian, supposed to do – fight each other?  Often they do, but perfection is achieved, says Nietzsche, in art, and especially in music. It takes Apollonian reason and controlled intentionality to create music, to put it into a form that makes it music instead of noise. But then to perform it, and especially to listen to it, you can lose yourself and go into the Dionysian ecstasy.  In a sense then, art is the meaning of life for Nietzsche.

[I think of modern examples in phenomena like Beatlemania of the 1960s, where large crowds of young people went into an ecstatic trancelike state of shrieking and crying, dancing and howling, when the Beatles played their music. A similar thing happened with the young Elvis a generation earlier. That’s Dionysian ecstasy caused by music. It’s not too dangerous because eventually the concert is over, reason returns, and you go home.  A most concentrated (though somewhat intellectualized) example of the dialect between the Dionysian and the Apollonian aspects of music can be found in Charles Ives’ short piece, The Unanswered Question. ]

Nietzsche says that the Dionysian chaos is released by music, then redeemed by Apollonian intellect, producing a defined life experience (a “semblance” he calls it).

Why is this dichotomy of Dionysian and Apollonian modes “ecstatic” though?  Why should it feel good?  Nietzsche says that loss of self is an unspeakable horror because it offers a glimpse of death, where subjectivity is nullified forever, but horrible though death is, the Dionysian intoxication is close to those origins we sing about in hymns. The Dionysian experience is “safe.” You die, but not really. You can experience the chaos that lies before your birth and after your death, but only temporarily. It’s the same reason so many people enjoy a good horror movie. Not only is it “fun,” but artistic ecstasy is the meaning of life. You must experience the Dionysian. Pursuit of wisdom alone is not natural. It is an abomination that will cost you your self  (page 48).

[Freud stole many of his ideas from Nietzsche, obviously, the Dionysian represented by the id and the Apollonian by the ego. Oddly, but perhaps characteristically, Freud rarely referenced Nietzsche in his works. Whereas Freud emphasized the necessity of suppression of the Dionysian, to preserve social order, Jung made a career out of recommending a “balance” of these two forces.]

A Theory of Music

Nietzsche said that music is more true and honest than any other art form because music is prior to rationality. It grows out of intuition, not thought. Even thinking begins with music, he says. Music begins with the body, right down to the neurophysiology. Music expresses bodily moods, and that is Dionysian. The Apollonian forms are superimposed on music later. Music is thus unconscious philosophy.

[There’s a lot to like in this formulation. Music is process over time, and so is biology, so he’s right when he says music begins with the body. However, it doesn’t seem quite right to me to say that Apollonian reason is imposed later. That’s hierarchical thinking, which is an error. The two processes are virtually simultaneous – oscillatory, I would say.  

Good music changes you, if you are educated to understand it. Like Beethoven’s earlier vs later string quartets. They demonstrate, they are, the mental and spiritual development of a particular human being. So the question is, how does music work as a communication? I now think there are three aspects

a. Intercorporeality: Production of music is physical and we empathically understand each others’ bodies. That’s why we enjoy ballet. And opera. Especially if you have played a certain instrument, you can hear its music better because you also hear it in your muscles, and lips, and fingers, etc., not just your ears.

b. Intellectually: As in the Beethoven quartets, we can conceptualize the musically expressed impulses in terms of age-appropriate developmental interests or confusions.

c. Emotionally: As in Schubert’s Death and the Maiden, Miles Davis, or Monk. The music is simply a roller-coaster of emotion. Richard Wagner said music transmits emotions immediately to the soul. Maybe that’s right, whatever it means.]

Nietzsche was focused on a special kind of music that he called Dionysian music, a type that puts you into an ecstatic trance of lost self. I think virtually any good music can do that, including all the examples I gave above, but Nietzsche was far more specific.

Dionysian music is terrifying, he said, whereas merely pretty, or melodic music is Apollonian, and hardly qualifies as music. Dionysian music is intense, fierce, harmonic, dissonant, danceable, and requires self-abandonment.  The only two concrete examples he gives are 1. The polyphonic music of the Renaissance composer, Palestrina, and 2. the music of Richard Wagner (especially, The Ring).

[I think Nietzsche’s examples are somewhat arbitrarily idiosyncratic, as are mine, but I have to believe that the whole rock-n-roll movement in music must surely qualify as a Dionysian movement. ]

Quoting Schopenhauer at length about music (page 78++): Nietzsche writes that music is a universal communication presenting the universal forms of all possible objects, all possible manifestations of will (intentionality), all human experiences and emotions. Music is essentially a non-verbal phenomenology of human experience, without a body. Music is the noumena of things, the kernel preceding form. Music communicates because as humans, we share the same inner world.

[That’s one of the best explanations of music I’ve ever read.]

Nietzsche describes the origin and evolution of the ancient Greek chorus, which accompanied the tragic plays, as the ultimate Dionysian music. The chorus itself would go into an ecstatic frenzy (how, we don’t know, because all that survives is the text of their lines), and this would whip the audience into a Dionysian frenzy.

[I imagine Pussy Riot’s performance in a Russian Orthodox church.]

This was literally, “the birth of tragedy in the spirit of music,” according to Nietzsche. The chorus, the music, was the show. The play, such as Oedipus Rex, was literally the sideshow.

[I have to believe him, because Nietzsche was an expert on the ancient texts, but I wished he had given more specific examples.]

The play itself, apparently, served as the Apollonian context that contained and controlled the Dionysian ecstasy of the music, and this balance, or dialectic, between the Dionysian and the Apollonian aspects constituted the highest form of ancient Greek art, the tragedy.

It was the highest form of art ever achieved, because tragedy allows the audience to experience the horror of uncontrolled nature and inexplicable fate, and yet walk away safely, exhilarated, and possibly also edified.

[Artistic tragedy is thus different from lived tragedy. If your brother is killed, that’s a tragedy. If Oedipus is killed and the chorus explains why, that’s’ an artistic tragedy that gives you solace.]

Socrates and The Death of Tragedy

Nietzsche despairs that this sublime art form, the ancient Greek tragedy, did not survive long. It was killed off by none other than the evil Socrates and his partner in crime, playwright Euripides.  As Nietzsche tells the story, Greek theater evolved until finally Euripides started producing comedies instead of tragedies. This was a significant loss, according to Nietzsche, because comedies are about individuals slipping on banana peels, not about the great mythical figures of tragedy that transcend individual experience.

[Aristotle, in his Poetics, had the same low opinion of comedies, saying they were just  farce, people farting, falling down, and bumping their heads. There was nothing to be learned from that, he said, regardless of their enormous popularity with audiences.]

Nietzsche describes comedy as concerning the mediocrity of everyday life. It is frivolous, and an outrage to theater (page 57). Comedy is womanish, despicable, and senile, surrounded, as it is, by the pink glow of delusional cheerfulness.

[Other than that, though, I wonder how he really felt?]

But worse than Euripedes and his comedies was Socrates. Euripides should have been forced to drink Hemlock along with Socrates, Nietzsche suggests. Both were guilty of “corrupting the youth.”  How so?

Socrates lionized reason and ignored the validity or even the existence of the terrifying Dionysian aspect of life. Euripides did the same in his light and frothy comedies.

In fact, Socrates saw Greek tragedy as pointless, actually worse than pointless, it was a lie.  What appears on stage is not real life, but pretend. It’s a lie. We must study what is true, not the lies. Only reason can lead you to virtue, knowledge, and happiness, Socrates taught. That is a delusional optimism, Nietzsche says. “The optimism of the syllogism drove the intoxication out of music” (page 70).

At the same time, with Euripides (and others), on stage, characters became frivolous old people, cheated pimps, cunning slaves.  Every story had a just and happy ending. Audiences loved it. They were all idiots, Nietzsche suggests. Such characters are “incapable of piety” (page 89). Everything was jolly. Gone was the elegiac pain of tragic loss.

And back to Socrates: his discipline of rationality and pursuit of knowledge was madness, but like Euripides’ plays, people loved Socrates, because of his implicit cheerfulness, the embedded message of optimism that everything could be known, everything could be understood and explained, given enough time and dialog. There was no kingdom from which reason was banned.

[That idea infuriates Nietzsche and forms the basis of his complaint against science.]

Socratic thinking (the Apollonian) spread “like a shadow” across time and cultures, leading to today’s one-sided life with its almost complete suppression of the Dionysian. It is an unnatural sickness, Nietzsche says. The mythic was destroyed by Socrates and by science. Science is anti-music. Even modern education hates and fears all forms of art, focusing instead on science.

[And by “art,” he means tragedy, the Dionysian-Apollonian dialectic, not merely aesthetics, which is hardly deserving of the name of art.]

The Rebirth of Tragedy?

Nietzsche ends his essay on a note of hope, that maybe all is not lost for pure art.  However, hope is tinged with an unfortunate historical creepiness because of its overt Germanic chauvinism, coming just a generation before the rise of the National Socialists. Not Nietzsche’s fault, of course, but still.

Nietzsche said that Tragedy and “true” art might be reborn when science hits the wall. He was convinced that science eventually would start nibbling at its own tail and collapse from its own internal contradictions.

[I agree with him. It is a crisis of science that is almost completely unrecognized today, but science will inevitably implode, and the implications are fearsome.]

Music can revive tragedy, Nietzsche says. As evidence he points to Beethoven, Wagner, and other “Germanic” music. Despite the dominance of Socratic (scientific) culture today, the German character, he says, still has a Dionysian streak that other cultures lack. The “Aryan character” is masculine and makes its own reality, as did Prometheus. It sins actively, like Prometheus. Contrast that to the “Semitic character,” which is feminine (Eve), and suffers The Fall, which is passive sin. (page 49). He concludes with the thought that Germanic character absorbs only the best from culture, both Apollonian and Dionysian. Tragedy could thus be reborn, if only we had a Führer! (page 111).

[Is there really a Dionysian component to human nature? After reading this essay, and having, for the most part, drunk the Nietzschean kool-aid, I now wonder if he may have made a very large mistake, mis-conceptualizing the nature of reason. But I’ll have to save that thought for another post.]

Shteyngart – Super Sad True Love Story

super-sad-true-love-storyA 75-Page Novel

Shteyngart, Gary (2010). Super Sad True Love Story. New York: Random House.

This is my second attempt to read Shteyngart, a darling of the literary fiction world these days. Earlier, I had attempted to read Absurdistan and was baffled. I couldn’t penetrate more than 50 pages, it was so awful (and not-funny). When I saw Super Sad on a remainders table, I saw an opportunity to give this highly-regarded author another chance. This time I pushed through to the very end, thinking that the author’s redemption was just a page turn away. It wasn’t.

The core of the story is a romance between a 39 year-old biotech salesman, Lenny, and a 20 year-old Korean immigrant, Eunice. “Romance” is too strong a word for their relationship. Lenny is head-over-heels in love, just because he’s an extremely lonely, ageing nerd. Eunice needs a “provider,” someone with a good credit score and an apartment in Manhattan. She treats him like dirt, which he feels he deserves, and that deepens his neurotic love. Eventually they break up. So much for that.

Another key aspect of the story is its setting in a near-future American dystopia. The government’s obsession with “security” has put national guard troops on every corner, hard currency is the yuan, and the country is at war with Venezuela. Everybody is glued to their apparatik, some kind of super smartphone used not only for communications, but for scanning other people, to learn their credit score, metabolic health, and “fuckability rating.” Everyone talks in slogans and shibboleths. People can scan documents for searchable data, but nobody can actually read. It’s a “post-literate society.” Eventually the guard attacks “low net-worth individuals” occupying Central Park in tents.

A final theme is supposed to be about mortality. Lenny works for a “life-extension” company that promises eternal youth soon, but youthful appearance now. That theme satirizes American’s worship of youth culture, fear of ageing, and fear of death.  Unfortunately, the satire is lame, though, being little more than statements that death is “bad.” There’s no real examination of or reflection on the meaning of mortality, so the theme does not contribute much to the book and remains a flat joke.

The narration is epistolary, with chapters alternating between Lenny’s diary and Eunice’s online messaging with her sister and parents (her mother’s persona is shamelessly stolen from comedian Margaret Cho’s stand-up routine). Lenny’s entries start in second-person (“dear diary”), but quickly morph into long, detailed first-person accounts. Eunice’s chapters ostensibly have no narrator, being merely the text of online chats, but they also evolve into long first-person descriptions.

The first 75 pages are interesting, fresh, and funny, playing off exaggerated stereotypes and satirical premises. But you can’t publish a 75-page book, so Shteyngart cycles the same jokes over, and over again, mind-numbingly, right to the pointless ending. If you found a copy for a couple of dollars, that’s a fair price to pay for an enjoyable 75-page literary flourish. Beyond that, there’s nothing.

Write Drunk, Edit Sober

HemingwayI think Hemingway once advised, “Write drunk, edit sober.” Unfortunately, I can’t write drunk — doesn’t work for me. But I can be very sober when I edit.

I’ve been editing my two “finished” novel manuscripts. The first one, now called Being Ruby, was complete at 70 thousand words. I’ll have to send it in to the Taos Writers’ conference soon, probably in April, for workshopping in July. So I went through it again and pulled out 2,000 words, bringing the count to just under 68K. That makes it revision five of draft ten. I amazed myself by pulling out that many words after so many iterations of the manuscript.

Most of those dead words were the consequence of over-writing, which I regress to in  narrative description. I write an idea and I don’t feel I nailed it, so I write it again in a different way, and leave both versions in. At the time, I have the sense that I’m elaborating the idea, but with my editor’s goggles on, it shows up as bad writing.

About 20% of the excess words came out of dialog, which is good because that means the dialog is fairly tight. Where it wasn’t, I was usually struggling with timing, so I’d put in some chit-chat to make time go by. I think it’s better to cut to micro-action to create conversational lacunae.

Also, I’ve become better at maintaining a naturalistic tone in dialog without filling it up with empty words. In real life, much conversation is babbling idiocy, but fictional characters can be remarkably concise and still sound like ordinary people. The secret, I’ve discovered, is the nonsequitur. Each interlocutor need not address the other’s previous statement or question directly as we do in real life.

I didn’t make any important structural or dramatic changes in Ruby, even though I’m not completely satisfied with the ending. I left it “open-ended,” as it were, so I could pick up the characters and the theme again in a sequel, but that leaves a lot of cash on the table. I’ll be interested to see what the workshoppers say about it.

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The second manuscript, now called Desert Dream, is just over 78,000 words after two revisions of draft 5.  Unlike Ruby, I don’t think it has a lot of dead verbiage in it, but it has a different problem.

Desert Dream opens with two short chapters showing my main character, Quinn, a hard-boiled cop, doing his job, investigating homicides, and that sets his time and place, introduces a few supporting characters, and above all, sets the tone, mood, and Quinn’s voice.  Fine. But readers had a problem.

I’m serializing the novel, or at least the first few chapters of it, on an online critique site (www.critiquecircle.com). It’s been generally well-received there, but several readers complained that the first two chapters feel like false starts. They want the plot to get moving immediately. In fact, the main plot doesn’t start until chapter 3 and doesn’t really get rolling until chapter 4. Some readers were unhappy that the cases Quinn worked on in the prologue chapters were introduced, then summarized and wrapped up (and tossed out). They wanted me to dramatize the long, slow, and interesting police procedures of finding clues, running into complications, and solving the case – what you’d expect in a typical genre crime novel.

Their complaints are fair. But my intention was not to write a police procedural, and Desert Dream is supposed to stretch beyond the typical crime novel to explore a character. It’s about a man, who happens to be a cop, who changes over time from being moralistically rigid and emotionally shallow, to, at the end, being humanistically nuanced and emotionally committed (that magic worked through romance). That’s my story.

It seems I started my readers off on the wrong foot with false expectations. The obvious solution would be to lop off the first two chapters and start where the main plot starts.  Maybe I’ll do that, but it’s going to be difficult to weave in all the introductory material about the character and his context, and especially difficult to establish his voice without some hard-boiled blood and guts for the opening. And besides, I like those first two chapters, and so do readers, many enthusiastically so.

spaghettiI’m whining. I can cut chapters with the click of a mouse. I’m not ready to do it though, because I’m not sure I understand the problem yet. The genre expectation is that you start with a bang then keep the ball rolling inexorably. I didn’t mean to write genre crime, but I greedily appropriated the germane tropes, so I have no one to blame if readers are misled. I need to let this problem simmer for a while before I do anything rash.

Why can’t I just write what I mean to say the first time? Why is it necessary to write a mixed-up plate of spaghetti that has to be untangled? Does everybody have that problem or is it just me?

DeLillo – The Body Artist

Body Artist - DeLilloWriter as Artist

DeLillo, Don (2001). The Body Artist. New York: Scribner.

This short book (125 pp) by an acclaimed master novelist is perplexing, disturbing, and confusing, yet also haunting, dense, and impressive from a craft standpoint. What’s it about?  I’m not sure. It might be about the grieving process after losing a loved one. It might be a ghost story. It might be a philosophical exploration of time and language. It might be pure prose poetry. It’s definitely experimental fiction, reminiscent of  Ondaatje’s Coming Through Slaughter

In a stunning opening chapter, a couple has breakfast in a country house. The POV is the woman’s stream of consciousness and her mind is loopy and forgetful. Is she merely undercaffeinated, or is there something wrong with her? The dialog is a masterpiece of minimalism that could be shown in writing courses. The tempo of the language mirrors the birds at the bird feeder.

Breakfast is over, he drives off to work, and she learns he committed suicide in his New York apartment. She grieves. She finds a young man, a boy, sitting in an unused room on the third floor. He is unable to speak coherently. He may be mentally abnormal.  He may be a ghost.  He speaks in riddles. The center part of the book shows her trying to communicate with him, and wondering who or what he is. He disappears one day.

In the last chapter, the woman leaves the country house, moves to the city and becomes a dancer/actor/artist in some kind of weird experimental theater performance in which she takes on multiple roles, of both genders.  I think that chapter could unlock the meaning of the whole narrative, if only the key fit something.

The virtues of this work of fiction (is it a novel?), are many, including DeLillo’s finely turned sentences, bullseye descriptions, and tone-perfect dialog. The writing shows some of his signature nonsequitur narration (per White Noise), as undercurrent. The story lacks overt dramatic tension but as a study of the consciousness of grief, and a meditation on the meaning of time and existence, it reaches poetic standards of compression and allusion. It also opens up one’s thinking about what is possible in fiction. I loved this book, but there are few people I could  recommend it to.

Baxter – The Feast of Love

feast_of_loveHappiness is a Warm Puppy

Baxter, Charles (2000). The Feast of Love. New York: Vintage.

In a group of interwoven short stories, Charles Baxter explores the vicissitudes of love, with plenty of sex. Chapters rotate among a handful of characters, all ordinary people living in contemporary Midwestern America. The characters in different stories often know each other, and their stories intersect as their lives do.

While the stories, and individual sentences, are well-constructed, and the writing in general is descriptive, witty, and often unexpected, the result overall is boring because the characters are so ordinary and their interests and concerns so incredibly quotidian. An example is a story about a man who buys a dog and asks his sister to keep it for a while, to give him time to convince his wife that they should have a dog. After a month, the sister won’t give the dog back because she, and her kids, have fallen in love with it. Infuriated, the man contrives to kidnap (dognap?) the pet by bribing the oldest child to let it go. That’s it. Humorous? Slightly. Charming? Maybe in a Norman Rockwell sense. Sentimental? Of course, with plenty of dog hugging and dog-licking-face moments. Worth my time to read this story? No.

A good comedian can make mundane events like that sing by using them to call out a general observation (as Wanda Sykes might do for race relations), or by exaggerating certain features of a story in a self-effacing way (as Kevin Hart might do), or by drawing ironic implications about society (as George Carlin might have). Baxter is not a comedian, and he simply tells the stories straight on. They are just ordinary stories, perhaps slightly wacky, the kind of humorous or poignant anecdotes you might hear at a party, but far too close to realism to be art or parable. There is simply no point to them. Nothing is illuminated. They’re like Seinfeld episodes.

I am perplexed by the high level of sentimentality in recent novels I’ve read. I have nothing against sentiment – good writing must convey characters’ feelings. But sentimentality is about superficial, clichéd feelings in response to stereotypical situations – lost dogs, sunsets, relationship breakups, and the like. One senses glibness reading about such common feelings, which do little to reveal the psychological depths of a character, less the human condition. All you’re left with are some clever situations and some admirable sentences. That’s enough for many readers, but it didn’t work for me.

Lamott – Bird By Bird

Bird by Bird LamottHumorous Homilies

Lamott, Anne. (1994). Bird By Bird: Some Instruction on Writing and Life. NY: Anchor.

In a series of personal essays and anecdotes, Lamott muses on what it’s like to be a writer. It’s not really an “instruction,” as the title says, but more aimed at inspiration. It would be an excellent read for beginning writers who live in the delusion that they are the next Faulkner or Fitzgerald waiting to be discovered.  Lamott’s down-to-earth and often humorous advice is that first, you probably aren’t good enough to get published, and second, if you do get published, it will go unnoticed. She doesn’t quite get around to saying it, but implies that recognition for writers has never been strictly a meritocracy. The NYTimes list is about the publishing industry, not about writing. Instead, Lamott writes, remember that writing is its own reward, so define success as satisfaction and be happy with that. This is true and good advice, if blindingly obvious.

Lamott insists that the main goal of writing is therapy, a highly questionable assumption. Her opening chapter is all about retrieving childhood memories and arranging them into a coherent narrative. Even though all writing is autobiographical to some extent, most writers are interested in using the tools of craft to say something meaningful in an artistic way; or even more simply, to tell an entertaining story that people enjoy reading. Self-disclosure is not the point of most writing, and in fact, as this book itself illustrates, can become tedious. Nobody cares about an author’s life as much as the author does. For a beginning writer who “can’t think of anything to say,” mining one’s childhood might be a useful exercise, but as a principle for writing in general, I think Lamott veered into the eccentric with this one.

Still, her overall advice for writers is valid: embrace humility, appreciate the joy of writing, acknowledge the difficulty of it, and accept the chaos and uncertainty that is creativity. She does offer one unexpected psychological insight at the very end which I think is true. Writers are angry people. Channel that anger into writing what you care about, to give your writing heart, she says.

Lamott’s practical writing advice centers on a charming anecdote. If you are ever overwhelmed by having to write a report on birds, you should be methodical and persistent; just take it bird by bird.

Wood – How Fiction Works

How Fiction WorksPhilosophy of Fiction

Wood, James (2008). How Fiction Works.  New York: Picador/Farrar, Straus, Giroux.

This beautifully manufactured little paperback surveys the main points of novel writing craftsmanship, such as characterization, point of view, metaphor, dialog, and so on, but does so in such a thoughtful, insightful, and subtle way that the result verges on philosophy.

He characterizes the history of the novel as, in large part, the creation and development of the free indirect style of narration, in which the narrator temporarily merges into the consciousness of the character.  For example, “He looked at his wife.  Yes, she was unhappy again, almost sick. What the hell should he say?”  (p.9)    Who said “Yes?”  Was it the husband or the narrator?  Both.

This kind of narrative trick is familiar to most writers, but Wood goes on to analyze many variations of free indirect style and how they subtly differ.   “So the novelist is always working with at least three languages.  There is the author’s own language… ; there is the character’s language, style, perceptual equipment, and so on; and there is the language of the world – the language that fiction inherits before it gets to turn it into novelistic style, the language of daily speech, of newspapers, of offices, of advertising, of the blogosphere and text messaging”  (pp. 34-35).

The whole book is thought-provoking.  Wood makes a convincing case that the history of novelistic description can be characterized as either pre- or post- Flaubert.  He is less convincing in batting down anti-realist arguments of the postmodernist movement. There he is jousting at straw dolls, not the most formidable arguments.  Still, it is all fascinating.

On the down side (for me), Wood assumes you really know your Western novelistic literature quite well.  He gives many excellent examples for the points he is making, from Shakespeare, Melville and Austen to Bellow and Pynchon.  But sometimes he assumes a lot: “Consider three men, each permanently affected by a chance occurrence: King David in the Old Testament, Macbeth; and Raskolnikov in Crime and Punishment…”  (p. 140).  That’s a bit of a stretch for me.

Nevertheless, this book is so thoughtful and interesting, it makes me motivated to go back and catch up on the literary education I never had.