The Question of Narrative Voice

Robot narrationThe Question of Narrative Voice

This is the latest in my series of process notes – thoughts about my own writing process. Why I think these would be of interest to anyone… well let’s just say these are, in fact, my notes on process.

My latest NBT (Next Big Thing) is in the early planning stages. It’s fiction; it hopes to be a novel. This time out I would like to present in fiction some of my hard-won insights about human consciousness, and the challenge is to do that without seeming didactic about it.

I sketched an outline, with characters noted as MC, for Main character, Ant, for Antagonist, RI for Romantic Interest, and so on – designating key roles I’d need without filling in the characters. I like to have a high-level map of the terrain before I embark. The final novel might end up being very different. Then I roughed-in some character sketches for MC and Ant, just to capture the images in my head.

The story revolves around the MC, of course, who is actually synthetic, a bio-robotic humanoid, but he doesn’t know that. He thinks he is fully human like everybody else, though perhaps unique in several traits, but unique is good, he believes. In the course of the novel, he discovers that he is synthetic and then he has to come to terms with that.  That scheme lets me examine what makes up human consciousness, and, in my humble opinion, why it’s not capable of synthesis, outside of fiction. The Ant catches on to MC’s secret and wants to capture him and reverse engineer MC to see how he’s made, then become famous by having the secret himself. So it’s also a chase story, perhaps similar to The Fugitive. Maybe I should throw in a one-armed man.

But then, at the bottom of my 10-page sketch, I wrote a heading that said: Narrative Voice. And I was stumped.  What would it be? I considered several alternatives – and it took me several days to think it through, if I have indeed thought it through; such things are always a work in progress. But here’s how it went:

First-Person Narration (1PN) – from MC’s point of view (POV), past tense. This seemed the most obvious and natural approach. MC just tells his story as he experiences it. This happened, then that happened then I discovered, OMG! I am a robot! And on and on.

The problem is that from MC’s POV there is no POV. He actually is little more than a huge database with an extremely convincing social interface. There’s literally nobody home inside. He has no point of view, by definition. He just calculates probabilities and patterns. He observes people and always says the right thing, but he understands nothing. Kind of like Siri on your iPhone.

It’s MC’s story of self-discovery, so 1PN seems completely appropriate. However, since MC has virtually no interiority, the whole thing would end up being flat. There would be nothing for him to narrate beyond external details. It might be interesting to let the reader discover that MC is an unreliable narrator. He thinks he’s a regular guy, but the reader would see, from the mistakes he makes, that he was anything but that. Humbert Humbert was like that. Maybe it would be like watching Rabbit Angstrom. But in this case, the contrast would be so stark, I’d be dealing with a one-trick pony. It wouldn’t be sustainable. On a 5-point scale, this choice, while it feels natural, looks like it could be a potential disaster. I give it only a 1.

A third-person (3P)-limited narrator from MC’s POV. A 3PN can create separation from MC’s POV. That lets MC evolve thinking he’s human, while 3PN suggests otherwise. 3PN can say, “He searched his database for a plausible answer.” The narrator comments on the discrepancy between human and non-human and the juice is in the narrator’s observations, not in MC’s simulated experience.

That’s how they did the Terminator, revealing the robot immediately – there’s no mystery about it. Also how they did it in I, Robot and AI. You give away the robot in the beginning and play out the consequences from there. It’s a robot story. But that’s not what I want. I want to explore the ambiguous question about what’s human and non-human. I don’t want to start out biased by a robot, so this strategy wouldn’t work well, if the narrator is honest – which a 3PN should be, in my opinion.

Also, since MC has only simulated feelings and intuition, the 3PN doesn’t really have much to work with – the strategy is hardly better than 1PN. On the plus side, it’s easier to elaborate situations and characters with more detail and context, and I have the possibility of head-hopping to other characters. That would be complex to do well. On a scale, this choice is do-able but feels clunky. It gets a 3.

What about multiple 1PNs?  MC’s family, friends and colleagues all get a chance in the spotlight to say what they think. The reader learns that MC is universally acknowledged as an oddball, though generally liked. Different characters talk about him,  including girlfriends, wife, doctor, colleagues, bartender, Ant, philosophers, etc. They each get their own POV as they relate anecdotes. MC also reacts. He defends his (non) POV to the reader.  It’s kind of Roshomon-like.

This strategy would be hard to write. I’d have to create a dozen unique voices and tie them together. I’d probably end up with stereotypes. They could talk to and about each other directly or implicitly, which would be fun. It would not be impossible, especially if the situation was right, some kind of a team or family gathering or group therapy with implicit off-screen connections among the characters. Would this be too cute, and too difficult for my skills? On a scale, my gut says it’s gimmicky, and only a 2.

What about a 1P  interviewer, not MC, but somebody else, like a documentarian or investigator? Like Brief Interviews with Hideous Men. That constitutes a framing device – a story within a story. On the plus side, I have a consistent 1P narrator handing off to multiple POVs during interviews. That adds a new dimension and an anchor. And it could hint at the reality of the extrahuman “deity” that MC decides on, especially if the interviewer was a mysterious investigator.

This would be easier to write than multiple 1PNs and it has a nice confessional feel, kind of a Frankensteinian or Draculean, 19th century tone. It seems less contrived than 1P-multiple, though I would have to invent a story arc for the interviewer and a plot for his project, and he/she would have limited access to others – only what comes out in the interviews.

The problem is, having the investigative frame shifts the focus of the story to the interviews. We want to know who the interviewer is and why (s)he is doing it. That creates a good deal of narrative distance between the reader and MC, which doesn’t seem right for a study of consciousness. Consciousness is about as intimate as you can get. On a scale: this one is intellectually attractive, but I’m wary of the frame. Give it a 3.5.

1PN-Ant – This one suddenly came to me as I was sketching out the story line for Ant. The antagonist has a compelling character arc, a crisis of conscience and a reversal. He’s almost the MC — he is human at least.  At first, Ant wants to control MC, but then, despite knowing the secret, makes an ethical decision to let him be. His reversal has consequences, as Ant virtually morphs into a second MC. That’s unusual, yet satisfyingly Aristotelian.

Ant decides MC is sentient, but by that time, the reader knows he is wrong, yet the events of the novel overall ultimately suggest that he was right, or at least it’s ambiguous. Featuring Ant as the 1PN is less heavy-handed than a deistic interviewer anyway. It’s Carroway-esque.

One problem is that Ant doesn’t necessarily have access to other people’s experiences, like MC’s home life, so he’s not well-positioned to narrate until after the crisis. That could be managed with conversations, backstory, documents. Another negative is that this strategy shifts the focus slightly away from MC and onto Ant. Maybe that’s not so bad — it highlights the contrast I want to make. Since MC has no genuine experience, he is best revealed from the outside anyway. I would have to build a whole narrative arc around Ant.   On a scale: this one is attractive. Give it a 4.

A 3PN- Limited-Ant. If I used Ant as the main, but not the only POV, and made the narrative voice third instead of first, then I could manage multiple POVs. The narrator can go in close on Ant, virtually as close as any 1PN, but as a 3PN, other characters can be placed in contexts. This narrator could do everything 1P-Ant does, but without the limited perspective and its claustrophobia. There’s no obvious downside, except some loss in the intimacy of Ant’s confession, but for a pseudo-genre piece about a robot, how intimate do I want to get?  On a scale: this one seems the best. I give it a  4+.

At this point I felt I had talked myself into a tentative answer. Onward, then.

Jauss – On Writing Fiction

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Jauss, David (2011). On Writing Fiction: Rethinking Conventional Wisdom About the Craft. Cincinatti, OH: Writers Digest Books.

This is a most engaging and helpful “How-to-do-it” book for experienced writers. Its seven essays are thought-provoking and clarifying, well-written and insightful, by a long-time teacher of creative writing. It is perhaps the best craft book I’ve read in a year. It’s not about fundamentals however, so if you’re looking for tips on how to develop a character or plot a plot, you won’t find them here. This book concerns the deeper intricacies of the craft for someone who has already learned the basics.

The second essay is one of the best, about narrative distance. Jauss reviews various narrative strategies, and focuses on the third person narrator, which can be objective, outside a character, reporting only observable behavior and speech (as a playwright must do); or the narrator can be “close,” inside the head of the character; an observer and reporter of the character’s innermost thoughts and feelings. A third-person narrator, in skilled hands, can cover both those poles and all the distance in between. The most interesting part of the essay is a discussion of “indirect interior monolog,” in which the narrator’s voice virtually merges with the character’s, a technique more commonly called free indirect discourse, or free indirect speech. Jauss’ name for it is unique, but more descriptive than the standard terms.

There are equally insightful articles on managing time in fiction, from present tense descriptions to reminiscences and flashbacks, to proleptic commentary, to full projection into the future. Compression and dilation of time are special artistic tools only fiction writers have at their disposal.

A strong essay criticizes the current fad of using the present tense. Jauss lists and explains a dozen shortcomings inherent to the present tense, along with a couple of advantages it offers to authors. He also has apparently had it with epiphanies, which are de rigeur in modern fiction. They’re usually obvious, unearned, and unnecessary, he says, and unrealistic besides. Epiphanies are rare in real life, and when they do occur, they often fade quickly or turn out to be wrong.  Epiphanies are overdone in fiction, he suggests.

The essays cite a cornucopia of well-known works of fiction as examples, but you would have to be very well-read to benefit from them, especially references to individual short stories. How many published stories are out there? Tens of millions? Jauss’ citation of such examples gives the impression that the book is addressed to MFA students who would be aware of some implicit canon. Academic insider-speak aside, the essays in this book are consistently informative and often revelatory.

Postmodern Art and Its Discontents

I’m between projects right now, so I’m goofing off by blogging about a course I’m taking from the University of Arizona, “Postmodern Art and its Discontents,” by professor Paul Ivey.

From the Syllabus:

Syllabus text

October 6, 2014

rothko-640The first lecture was “What is Postmodernism?” In three hours and a dizzying blur of slides, Ivey made the case that the postmodern world view rejects the essentialism of modernity that comes out of The Enlightenment. It rejects universal themes and focuses instead on relativism and  particularities:  surfaces, colors and forms for their own sake.

However, after the class, I had a nagging doubt. In every example shown in class, the artist had believed he (all males) was projecting some essential meaning. Mondrian had his spiritual thing with horizontals and verticals. Rothko believed he was expressing emotion so purely that viewers of his work would experience exactly what he experienced. Pollack was expressing himself in universally appreciated kinetic action, Kandinsky was painting “inner necessity,” and so on.  (A lot of the slides were from the abstract expressionists, but not all). These were all “theories” or at least world views, that presuppose universals and essentials – basically modernist views.

So I began to suspect that while viewers of art, academics, and especially critics, like Clement Greenberg, could take the postmodern view, an artist could not. If you’re an artist, you have to believe in something. You have to believe that what you’re doing has some intrinsic, if not universal meaning, otherwise you wouldn’t do it. You have to believe in essences and universals, because if you didn’t, there would be no difference between serious painting and a 5-year old wallowing in fingerpaints.

So I formed the hypothesis that there really are no postmodern artists, only postmodern critics and consumers of artistic product.  This would be consistent with some critical theory, such as Art Danto’s in  “The Madonna of the Future.”

So before the second class, I offered my new hypothesis to Professor Ivey and asked him what he thought. He gave a plausible, but not entirely satisfying reply. He said that the distinction between modern and postmodern world views should not be taken as antipodes. Some (many) artists concern themselves mainly with surface and colors rather than meaning, but that does not mean they have empty heads. When they create art, they still have something  in mind, perhaps some essential thing or intrinsic property, but their sensibility runs to relativism or decoration or self-reference, or some other postmodern value. It’s not a black-and-white either-or situation between modernism and postmodernism.

Well, okay. But that does not refute my hypothesis, which, in my opinion, still stands.  You heard it here first.

 

October 13, 2014

Lawrence-carpentersThe second lecture focused, first, on postmodernism in architecture, because, according to the prof., it was in architecture where postmodernism first took root. The so-called international style, after WWII, was supposed to be rational, functional, and not ethnic – thus international. You could build the same  glass and steel box in New York or Bombay. Supposedly, it was “honest” architecture, not pretending to be a Greek temple or anything other than what it was. In that sense, it was post-modern, because it rejected the Enlightenment ideal of individual self-expression.

Las Vegas, NV, was held out as another example of postmodern architecture, where many of the buildings are simulacra. They start out as parodies, or imitations of other structures, like the Eiffel tower. However, after time, they become themselves a kind of alternate reality : “The Eiffel Tower-the one in Las Vegas.”   Disneyland is another example. Mickey Mouse is a real entity, though not a real mouse. He is hyper-real.

The point is that the visitor should have feelings around the signifiers, not the truth of what it is (which is essentially, nothing). That’s exactly why I despise Las Vegas. I see it as purposely superficial and  cynically manipulative. But the professor loves the architecture there. Exact replicas are real, he says. There is no deep essentialism of the thing. It is what it is.  I guess I am a modernist at heart.

The second half was a history lesson – America in the 1950’s. What were the images and values expressed at that time, and how did they set the context for subsequent art in America, and possibly, the roots of postmodernism?   We looked at works by Jasper Johns, Norman Rockwell, Robert Frank, and Eduardo Paolozzi, among many others.

Again after the class, I had a thought. (This professor is like a fire hose – he puts out ideas way faster than I can process, so when he asks at the end, “Are there any questions?” I don’t have any. I have them on the drive home.)

My question was something like this: Of all the work we saw, from the 1950’s and some 1960’s, it represented modernism in mainstream culture, mostly. We saw a lot of advertisements from the period. Mid-century interior design, which reflected the way of life of the middle classes,  tended to minimalism, clean lines, and functionalism, so,  a hint of postmodernism there. (My house is today decorated in that style – I love it.)

BUT, every single example we saw showed white, middle-class people, most of them prosperous, or aspirationally so.  Donna Reed. Ozzie and Harriet. Leave it to Beaver. Where were the images of waiters, shop clerks, hotel maids, drug addicts, priests, military men, shoe shiners, blacks, Puerto Ricans, Chinese? Where were those images?  Where the hell was Jacob Lawrence?  I felt I had been hoodwinked into a false cultural history.

Then, on reflection, I thought maybe the language of the visual arts simply is a white, middle-class, developed-world, rich-people’s language.  Other groups – the poor, minorities, the uneducated, immigrants, the sick, the stupid, the marginalized – they simply do not speak the language (or didn’t – early to mid-20th century –things are different now, though not by much, I would say).  Like, if you want to play polo, you’re going to need a horse. It’s not discriminatory – it’s just a requirement for getting into the club.  Visual arts might have been like that. May still be.

In order to partake of the visual arts, since mid 19th century, I would say, you needed the leisure time to do so, the disposable income, the education, and the cultural experience that allows those works to speak to you – experience like mainstream television, politics, jobs, and so on. This my hypothesis for why the history of the visual arts that the professor gave was so biased. Jacob Lawrence was an outlier.

If this is a correct hypothesis,  then I understand better, but I’m still not happy.  The prof. should have framed his lecture in a way that would allow us to understand his presentation as a certain point of view and not as “the” social history of mid-century.  I have questions!

 

October 20, 2014

Duchamps UrinalThe third lecture opened with the professor setting up Marcel Duchamp as a pivot point in the history of art. Around 1917, Duchamp declared that art is a conversation, and that meaning is not in the art object. This is why he was able to mount a urinal on a wall in a museum and declare it as art. The viewer brings interpretation to the object and the artistic meaning is found in the conversation with the artist (and among viewers and critics). This idea was the birth of postmodernism in art, according to the professor.

The so-called pop artists embraced the idea that the object itself has no meaning – only the artistic dialog does. In dance, for example, Merce Cunningham worked with “found movements,” much as Duchamp used found objects. Cunningham’s dances contained no narration or emotional expression, he said. They meant nothing in themselves. They were just movements.

Robert Rauschenberg, who made sets for Cunningham performances, embraced the idea. He assembled found objects and called them art. He denied that they expressed anything. The point of art is not for the artist to express feelings – who cares about that?  The point is to have a dialog about what artistic objects might mean.

Rauschenberg wanted to achieve total objectivity in art, presenting objects and images that had no personal significance to him and did not express anything about himself. This is the opposite of abstract impressionists like Pollock. Rauschenberg also claimed that identical pictures are each valid works of art. The concept of “the original” derives from abstract expressionism (ab-ex, in the professor’s argot). The work is the trace of the “original expression.” But if nothing is being expressed, then “original” is not defined. Two identical works of art are both works of art of equal value.

It’s a short step from there to Andy Warhol, who delighted in making multiple silk-screen images of the same content, and declaring that each was an original work of art (and pricing each one accordingly). Thus we get the famous repetitive images of Campbell’s soup cans, Marilyns, and Elvises.

At this point, I had an actual question in the middle of the class. Were these pomo artists mistaken about what they were doing? From philosophy and literature of the time (and later), many scholars argued that there is no such thing as objectivity. That is a myth of science. Everything is interpreted, because we are human.

Every “found” object is found and selected by someone, for some purpose, because it means something to them. Likewise, assembling collage-like works that include objects and news clippings, refrigerator doors, car bumpers, and other seemingly random objects, is not an objective activity. The result is framed, and it is often graceful, beautiful and even expressive (Rauschenberg’s “Rebus” is an example).

I grant that the artist may have no articulate thesis in mind, no premeditated purpose for collecting and assembling certain objects, but that only means the meaning, the self-expression, is more subconscious than conscious, but it’s still there. It is not possible to escape your humanity. Warhol claimed he was a machine and his studio was a factory, and he swore there was nothing of himself in the works he produced, but I don’t believe that for a minute. Just look at his very powerful images for proof. Machines lack creativity. They lack the motivation of the artistic impulse. They lack aesthetic sensibility. They lack values and judgment. They lack the desire to communicate with people by producing art. Andy Warhol was no machine.

So my hypothesis is that the post-Duchampian pop artists were either deluded or disingenuous about the rationale for their work, because it is not humanly possible to not be a human.  I was totally ready at the end of the class when the professor finally asked if there were any questions. It was my big chance!  Alas, I was unable to articulate my thoughts as well as I have here and I only managed to blurt out the objection that there is no objectivity, so what was up with these guys?

The professor’s generous answer was that yes, these pop art works necessarily express subjectivity but not in the same sense as the ab-ex artists, who were all about individual subjectivity, the “trace of the trembling hand,” he called it. The pop artists were subjective in the sense of being tuned into the collective – consumerism, advertising, economics, mass production, popular life – but not in the sense of having individual feelings to express. I thought that was a pretty good answer, although a bit revisionist, a bit art-historian; not consistent with the pronouncements of the artists themselves. Of course artistic manifestos are usually vainglorious, and probably shouldn’t be taken at face value.

The lecture also considered Jasper Johns and his “collection” of found symbols, which are not exactly the same as found objects, in some way that is hard to specify. A painting of an American flag – is it art? It’s not a flag. It’s not “just” an object made of encaustic and newsprint, but it is something.

The same with Johns’ famous target pictures. Targets have meaning, but he didn’t mean anything by painting them, he said. Again, I don’t believe that. Targets have social meaning. A target is something that receives violence, or at least harm, from an arrow, a gun, or a criticism. You can be a target of an investigation. A target never sings, for example. It has a specific social meaning and that’s why it is a symbol.  So to present targets by saying “Oh, these images don’t mean anything; they’re just paint on canvas,” is to miss the target. My view is that Johns and the others were still doing abstract expressionism, but with minimal explicit intentionality.

 

Roy_Lichtenstein_Drowning_GirlThere was a section on Lichtenstein and his cartoony comic-book-like works, which are sort of iconic of the pop art movement. Lichtenstein said he was picturing detachment. The cartoon format made the content of every picture ironic, even (especially) when the content was about war, violence, sex, romance, and so on. That description seems suspicously expressive to me.

Another question bubbled up: What is the relation between a caricature and a photograph? Caricatures are ironic, because they are minimalist and they exaggerate certain key features and minimize others (but what are “key features” – that’s an embedded question). Photographs are literal representations. Lichtenstein was a caricaturist, in some way. But what is a caricature? I wasn’t sure the question was germane enough, or that I could articulate it concisely, and time was up, so I had to let it go, and maybe that was just as well, because my brain was exhausted.

 

October 27, 2014

Stella Gran CairoMinimalism

After pop art blew its cortex, the next, reactionary, movement was Minimalism, which pushed even further the idea that art need not be either representational or expressive. Rather, the minimalists said, art objects existed in-themselves without referring to anything. Pop artists like Warhol and Lichtenstein were referring to popular culture; their works were still signifiers. Minimalists eschewed signification and insisted that their stark cubes, levers, and monochrome canvases referred to nothing at all. They defied you to  “read” a minimalist piece as a picture of anything. Their sculptures were not sculptures, but “presences” that did not occupy or define any representational space.

If all that sounds like overcaffeinated academic theory, it probably was. Minimalist art was/is harsh. “Not loveable,” in the words of the professor. The art objects of the minimalists were designed to exist without emotion or intellect, without symbol, message or color. They constituted art only because they occurred in art galleries, in the tradition of Duchamps’ famous urinal. We looked at Carl Andre’s arrangement of 157 fire bricks in a line on the floor, called “Lever.” Such works would make anyone want to yell out, “You call that art?”

1966-Andre-Lever-CDespite the austere, almost cynical, poke-you-in-the-eye nature of these minimalists works, I thought they had at least one redeeming virtue. The professor asserted that these works reveal the space of the gallery they are shown in, and that, in turn, refers to the body of the viewer. For example, with Andre’s bricks on the floor, you have to decide if you are going to walk around them, step over them, or even step on them. The “meaning” of the artwork is actually to make the viewer aware of his or her embodiment with respect to the work. I think that’s about right.

The idea could have been explained more elegantly as “anomalous affordances,” referring to James Gibson’s 1979 “theory of affordances” in his last book, The Ecological Approach to Visual Perception. That theory, based on the work of Gestalt psychologist Kurt Koffka, recognizes that things in the world, the whole environment in fact, present “opportunities for behavior” called affordances, to whatever animal perceives them. A pond affords locomotion for a duck but not for a cat. An empty space is a stage (for a human of certain disposition). As Koffka said, “Banana says ‘Eat me,’ water says ‘Drink me,’ woman says, ‘Love me.’” (That was in the 1930’s).

Gibson’s theory of affordances is a lot more sophisticated than that, but that’s the idea. Minimalist works of art present the viewer with affordances for behavior, but not the ones you expect. When you find 157 bricks laid out on the floor of an art gallery, you’re not sure what the affordances are, and you have to consider. It offers an anomalous affordance, and that’s the name of the game for minimalist art. That’s my interpretation and I’m sticking to it.

Inevitably, there was a theoretical reaction against the minimalists. The so-called post-minimalists (yes!) objected that minimalist art was disconnected from its zeitgeist. These were the sixties, after all, a period of great social and moral upheaval, yet the minimalists failed to reflect anything about the world that contained it.  It’s not a very cogent criticism, it seems to me, since that was exactly the goal the minimalists sought: to create art that did not refer to anything.

Nevertheless, the post-minimalsts moved away from objects of any kind and looked only at materials.  If you’re going to purposely make meaningless art, they seemed to say, why bother even to lay bricks on the floor. Just take the bricks and pile them in a heap. It’s not about the line on the floor; it’s about the bricks.

Morris Pink FeltSo, for example, we have Robert Morris’ piece, “Pink Felt,” which amounts to nothing more than a pile of pink felt strips thrown in a corner.  It’s not even a recognizable object. Forget objects. The artistic interest should be in materials. How is that germane to the times? The post-minimalists  were even more obscure than the minimalists, but they claimed social relevance because society is built out of materials, and processes are applied to them, like cutting, throwing, piling, stretching, and so on.  I think that rationale is pretty lame, but like the minimalists, the real post-minimalist artistic virtue is in presenting anomalous affordances. When you confront a pile of pink felt, your first reaction is that it’s trash – it affords nothing more than disposal. But then you start thinking that it looks soft, flexible, smooth-ish, lightweight but warm, not pink anymore – not a pleasant color, but if I was a rat, it would afford great nesting, and before you know it, you’re off on a mental journey involving consideration of all the object’s affordances. So I do think even the most nonsensical post-minimalist work has artistic virtue. Perhaps not really worth the effort to extract it, however. But it had to be done.

Turrell skyspaceThe final section of the lecture involved works in light – no objects, not even materials – just pure light. Can that be art?  Yes, it turns out.  Many fine examples were shown, but the “skyspaces” of James Turrell demonstrate the concept best. You walk into an environment that is structured only by light, and sometimes you can’t even tell where you are, at first.  It’s as if all affordances for behavior have been removed. Or should it be seen as all affordances for behavior have become possible?  It’s weird, but it’s still good art.

 

November 3, 2014

LevitatedMassThe last lecture ended discussing pure light – not art objects at all!  How could an artist possibly top that?  And it does seem that art history is a game of topper.

Well, how you top having art with no object, is to go outside the museum and dig holes in the ground. This lecture began with a consideration of earthworks, which have a long history, going back at least to Stonehenge, and up to Ryoanji, the famous gravel and stone garden in Kyoto.

The professor pointed out that in earthwork art, the artistic tension is often between the geometric, built environment in which we live, and the organic shapes and textures of nature. A recent example is Michael Heizer’s “Levitated Mass,” a 340-ton boulder placed atop a concrete trench in Los Angeles. You can walk under it. If you dare. The trench is geometric, part of the built environment. The rock is a rock. If you choose to walk under, you must confront its enormous rockness. I think that counts as art.

We considered Christo, the famous artist who wraps things in fabric, everything from seaside cliffs to the Berlin Reichstag. Wrapping things makes them strange. The artistic tension is that a “natural” or at least familiar part of the landscape becomes defamiliarized when it is wrapped. I think that counts as an artistic gesture.

It isn’t a long stretch from earthwork art to pure conceptual art, where the “artistic object” is all in your mind, not in the museum, not even outside. Whatever is displayed in the world to indicate that “art has happened,” is perfunctory. An example is a Sol Lewitt work, made of a sheet of instructions for how to paint the piece he has in mind. He mails the instructions to the museum and they can, if they want to, hire people to do the painting as specified. The art however, is not the painting. Rather, it is in the idea for the painting given in the instructions, and the idea of doing that in the first place. It’s like the instructions for assembling an Ikea bookshelf. Once you’ve understood the instructions, do you really need the bookshelf?

Haackes ChairsOne of my favorite conceptual pieces was Hans Haacke’s wooden chairs. This piece did involve some actual objects, but again, the point of the work is not the objects, but the concept behind them.  A straight-backed wooden chair sits on the museum floor, in front of a canvas on which is painted a life-sized rendition of that same chair, next to a printed definition of “chair.” The viewer is forced to consider all three objects to get at some Platonic “chairness” which is the real art object. Wonderful stuff.

At this point I began to wonder if modern art had simply moved from the amygdala of the ab-ex artists to the cerebrum of the conceptualists. In both cases the “art” was inside the artist’s intention, not in the manifest object, with the difference only being whether the intentionality was emotional or intellectual.

And that thought led me to wonder if there really was progress in the history of art, or if progress was just a story art historians use to organize the artistic domain. Certainly, looking at the dates of all the works considered so far, 1950’s to 1970’s, they did not occur in a neat, sequential timeline. Everything was happening at once, so any idea that each “movement” trumped the previous seems like a historian’s construction, not a natural fact.

And that led to the question, who are these art historians who determine what counts as a “movement” in art history?  Well, my professor clearly is one of them. I could hammer out a representation of a horse on a copper sheet and it wouldn’t count as a member of any art movement. Why not? Because it would not have the blessing of the gatekeepers, the academics and museum curators and wealthy collectors. They determine what counts as art. It almost has nothing to do with the art itself.

As a writer of fiction, I am continually perplexed by the question, “Why is it so hard for an artist to find an audience?”  And likewise, “How does writer X, whose work is clearly minor and derivative, get a full page review in the NY Times Review of Books?” And the answer seems to be the same as for the visual arts: you must be favored by the academics and the media moguls and the wealthy. Sure, you must have worthy product to get in the door, but after that, what counts as important is an implicit consensus among an arbitrary, self-appointed social class. This was obviously not a hypothesis that would be well-received by my professor, so I kept it to myself during the question and comment period.

Yoko_Ono_-_Cut_Piece_1965The end of this lecture moved to another aspect of conceptual art, “Happenings,” which were popular in the 1960’s. A group of people would be invited to a space, and each person would receive instruction to perform a certain act, such as, peel an orange, climb a ladder, sweep the floor, or shout a political slogan. All of that would take place simultaneously, and that would be the happening. The similarities to Sol Lewitt’s instructions for a painting are apparent, but in this case, not even the instructions count as the art object. The ephemeral event itself, the fact of the “happening” is the art object. To my mind, that is borderline nonsense, but in the context of what had gone before it, I will grant that it could be construed as art. An important conceptual artist in this genre was/is Yoko Ono.

But again, if I call up five friends and invite them over to make spaghetti with me, does that count as an artistic happening? No. What counts as art is controlled by the thought leaders (thought-police?) who have the right combination of  money, status, and media. I can’t declare my own art. That fact puts the lie to the idea of art as “a conversation” between artist and audience, focused on the artistic product. That model can’t work if “the audience” holds disproportionate power because, as Habermas noted, no such conversation can be in good faith.  Is this conclusion cynical, or just realistic?

 

November 10, 2014

YK BlueThe previous lecture ended with consideration of artistic “happenings” in the 1960’s, which apparently evolved into the “Fluxus” movement, founded by a group of artists in New York City about that time. These people did not accept the authority of museums to determine what counts as art (a conclusion I reached on my own at the end of the previous lecture – why do I bother to strain my skull when the answers are forthcoming?).

The Fluxus group wanted “happenings” and all forms of art to be available to the masses, so they would make up little puzzles and games and collages and sell them in classified advertisements to anyone who wanted to participate in modern art. No one wanted these gimmicks. Their idea was wrong. Somebody, if not the museums, then the art historians, have to be gatekeepers, the definers of art. Art is a collective social construction.

Nevertheless, the iconoclasm of the Fluxus movement had a certain wit that made it fun. They revered Duchamp.

Bacon -Pope_Innocent_XPostwar French art was not a direct response to American postmodernism, but French Nouveau Realism did incorporate images from American pop culture. The pieces shown in class – Giacometti, DuBuffet, Francis Bacon – seemed closer to abstract expressionism than postmodernism, to my eye. But apparently, the blend of postmodernism and Nouveau Realism evolved into Dada, an art movement that denied that art had any meaning at all. That, of course, is a self-refuting idea, like stating “I do not exist!”  Still, everything that can be said, must be said.

I was interested in Roland Barthes’ idea of cultural signifiers (in his “Mythologies”), suggesting that mass media produces a “false consciousness” that embraces the social status quo without question. Actually, I think that is the case for most people. It’s a very elaborate example of the naturalistic fallacy: What is, is taken to be “what ought to be.” It is a known error in thinking, but many people are susceptible to it anyway.

In art, Barthes’ ideas played out in production of junk sculptures, literally piles of junk that had no apparent meaning. In fact junk is defined as stuff that has been discarded, such as worn-out car tires, so whatever social and commercial meaning it once did have is gone. Artists would collect such junk and put it in frames and declare it art.  Wink, wink, Duchamp. The artistic rationale was that looking at trash is an indirect way of looking at people. Some artists would frame a pile of their own detritus and call it a self- portrait.  That’s a stretch, but I see the point.

Le_VidePushing the idea to its logical limit was a wonderful piece displayed in the Iris Clert gallery, “Le Vide,” an absolutely empty vitrine, or display case. But it makes sense, because it simply illustrates that art is whatever is framed.  Take a pile of junk, put a frame around it, you’ve got art. So why not dispense with the junk and just go with the frame. The frame’s the thing!  (I wonder if artists ever smoke dope.) Yves Klein produced monochrome panels and called them art, which they were, because they were framed (first illustration above: Yves-Klein Blue).

Inevitably, somebody had to think of it, and Piero Manzoni did. He collected his own shit, canned it, labelled it, and presented it as art, labelled “Merda d’Artista.” A tin was sold for 124,000 (about $155,000) at Sotheby’s on May 23, 2007. That makes a great story, and the professor Merda dArtist -manzoniused it to emphasize that the artist defines what counts as art. It was the triumph of the Fluxus movement. And yet, I thought the professor might have emphasized the wrong point. It wasn’t about the shit at all. It was about the frame – in this case the can.  A pile of shit by itself can never be art, no matter whose body it came out of. What turns it into art is the can, and its label.

Despite the sometimes absurd productions of pomo artists, I believe they did manage to say something interesting and true about art, and even about the nature of consciousness in the context of creativity. Any conceptualization is an act of self-restraint, self-inhibition. To conceptualize something, you must stop what you’re doing, step out of the stream of consciousness for a moment, step back, and “frame” some aspect of experience. That’s what it means to conceptualize something and very few animals exhibit capacity for conceptualization – none so strongly as humans. We have the capacity for self-inhibition that artistic creativity requires. We are perhaps the only animal that can put a frame around something.  We are the artists.

 

November 17

tilda swinton napsThis lecture began with a survey of performance art, which involves some kind of interaction between the performer and the audience, and the performance need not be exuberant. An example is Tilda Swinton taking a nap in the MoMA. She’s in a glass box, and she sleeps, and people can look at her. What makes it artistically interesting is that it’s Tilda Swinton, famous actor. What you get to look at then, right up close, is celebrity itself. Why you would want to do that, I don’t know, but I do allow that celebrity is a social force of some kind and here it is on artistic display.

Abramovic ArtistIsPresentMarina Abramovic is not a celebrity, not outside the art world anyway, but her piece, “The Artist is Present” involved simply sitting silently across a small table from a museum-goer. You could sit there and stare at her for as long as you like. How is that art? The title  of the performance is the key. What’s on artistic display is “presence” itself, the very presence of another human being. Anything that can be conceived, can be presented to an audience in an artistic way – as long as it is “approved” by the appropriate gatekeepers. That is, performance art, like any art, is only defined as art when it has the imprimatur of museum curators. Tilda Swinton sleeping at home tonight is not art.

The question arose in class, a question I had already asked myself, is there – has there been – progress in art?  Did we start out with representations of landscapes and people, and “move on” to impressionism, then abstraction, then kinetic art, then conceptual art, and so on, at each step abstracting artistic objects and their referents into ever-more ethereal insubstantiality?  Professor Ivey said no. There is no “arrow of art history.” There is an informal dialectic, a back-and-forth dialog that sometimes leads to a synthesis, but – and this is the point – there is no telos. The evolution of modern art is not heading “towards” anything. There is no final goal. There is no directionality. All we have is dialog.

End-of-the-WorldExcept, maybe there is a kind of negative telos. As a species, we are destroying the planet rather rapidly, and there is some realistic fear that future generations will not be able to survive the changes we wreak. So in that sense, all artistic endeavor (as well as all science, literature, and other human activity) must be  in a context of avoiding total self-annihilation. If we collectively commit suicide, there is no audience left to enjoy the irony of that performance, so it cannot be art. Thus, there is, after all, a universal value even for the postmodernists: we desire, as a species, to continue living.

pussy RiotLady Gaga was presented as a performance artist, not merely because she sings (rather well, I’d say), but because she creates an interactive spectacle that could be construed as an artistic expression. The trouble with that example is that she does not have the approval of the artistic gatekeepers. It raises questions. Was the publicity stunt or event created by Pussy Riot, considered art?  They danced and screamed (sang?) inside a Russian Orthodox church and were predictably arrested and imprisoned. A political act, yes, but was it performance art?  The professor says yes, because they define themselves as artists (musicians).

That answer didn’t satisfy me, until I realized that I had overlooked one of the most important gatekeepers, and thus definers, of what counts as art: the media. If the mass media displays a performance, then it counts as art. The Pussy Riot performance was taped and that tape was seen worldwide. That gives it the stamp of legitimate art. As does Lady Gaga’s public performances. So any artist still must get the nod from an official guardian of art, in order for a work to qualify, but in addition to the traditional guardians – curators, collectors, critics, and academics – we must now consider the mass media.

It’s not a perfectly clear answer. If I take a picture of something, that puts a frame around it, but it does not automatically make it art. If Diane Arbus or Anne Liebowitz takes the same picture, then it is art, I think. Although perhaps not if it’s never shown. That’s the key – the work would have to be shown, in a context that has the approval of the cultural arbiters. It’s not about the photograph, not about the subject of the picture, not even about the frame. Art is defined by a collection of arbiters that the culture tacitly accepts.

wonderwomanWe looked also at video art. Christian Marclay’s wonderful video, Telephones (1995) [On YouTube: www.youtube.com/watch?v=yH5HTPjPvyE], Dara Birnbaum’s Technology Transformation (http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x4y5e5_dara-birnbaum-technology-transforma_shortfilms), and the marvelous Semiotics of the Kitchen, by Martha Rossler (www.youtube.com/watch?v=3zSA9Rm2PZA).  Why are these videos “artistic?” I’m not sure I’m able to say, and the professor did not address that question. At this point, all I can say about labeling video as art is the Clement Greenbergian expression, “I know it when I see it.”

Manets-Le-Dejeuner-sur-lh-007The professor suggested that the artistic “product” on display in video art is something like telepresence. You, the audience are both here (in the gallery), and there (in the video’s world), a sensation that grew, he said, out of the development of wireless telegraphy in the 1840’s, which allowed you to “be” in two places at once. Telepresence since then has marked a profound transformation in how art is experienced.  But I am not so sure about that. Wasn’t Manet’s 1862 painting, Le Déjeuner sur l’herbe a clear exercise in telepresence? Wasn’t that the whole point of it? I feel there is more to be said on this topic.

 

December 1, 2014

niki de Saint Phalle 1966Feminist art – is there such a thing? Perhaps there once was, in the 1960’s. But why would a 21st century professor be furthering the myth that women are some kind of separate species with their own art forms? I was appalled. Yet, an obvious answer is that he is a historian, so I allowed that he was justified in reporting on what happened a half-century ago when many women artists reacted against their systematic exclusion from the art world. But as the lecture and the examples moved toward modern times, I found the professor’s insistence on treating art produced by women as a separate topic, increasingly grating.

The 1960s and 1970s produced a surge of feminist changes, including the formation of the National Organization for Women, the almost-passage of the Equal Rights Amendment, the passage of Roe v. Wade, publication of Betty Friedan’s “The Feminine Mystique,” among many other social phenomena. According to the professor, the main goals of feminist art were,

1. to get women artists included in the canon of “great artists,”

2. to overcome stereotypes in how women are represented in art,

3. to affirm a history (“herstory”) of women’s achievements in art.

2 Frankenthaler Helen Seascape 1962How could these noble goals be accomplished? That  was a difficult question for the artists themselves. Should women artists produce the same kind of work men artists were making?  Some took that route and became abstract expressionists, for example (Helen Frankenthaler comes to mind – although she was systematically excluded from the professor’s earlier lectures covering the ab-ex artists, and she was not mentioned in this lecture, either).  Or, did women artists have a special “feminine” point of view, a unique sensibility that they should promulgate as an alternative to men’s art?

sylivia_sleigh_paul_rosano_reclining_1Or, should women artists react as a kind of polar opposite to men’s art, as some did: Sylvia Sleigh comes to mind. She often depicted male nudes in a way that paralleled and mocked traditional female nude images that populate art museums. Oddly, I thought that approach didn’t work, although that could be just because I’m a hetero male. The male nudes have a certain painterly aesthetic, but as representations, they don’t carry much force, either erotic or aesthetic or in terms of power-relationship. The symmetry that Sleigh was aiming at doesn’t exist, I think. Even today, heterosexual men still “own” the visual reclining-nude-1935-Serebriakovarepresentation of women, and use it to project their own sexual anxieties and eroticism. Do women make converse projections onto representations of nude males? I doubt it, if for no other reason than that they have historically lacked opportunity to do so, and this gets at the core problem of “feminist art,” in my way of thinking: Men are the gatekeepers. Men are, for the most part, the curators, collectors, historians, reviewers, and critics. That has changed some in recent years, but only a little, and only recently.

Professor Ivey did not consider the possibility that the problem of women’s exclusion from mainstream art was not about biology, and not about a special feminine point of view, but, purely and simply, a problem of capitalism and control of social institutions. As long as women were and are excluded from the gatekeeper class, there was little chance they would ever be acknowledged as great artists – that’s the obvious problem of  feminist art.  But the professor spent the lecture talking about women’s unique biology, social experience, and mentality, as if those were the main issues. This was frustrating to me, but in fairness, I admit that most women artists at the time also struggled with the question of what constituted feminist art. Even today, people in America are naïve about who controls the money and the social power, and that those are the forces that constitute the culture. I nevertheless feel that the professor had some social responsibility to broach that topic and not ignore it.

Neel self-portrait 1980The first “wave” of feminist art did tend to focus on biology, with reactive role-reversal concerning the imagery of the human body. Some, like Alice Neel, emphasized unsentimental, un-erotic, de-mystified images of the female body, trying to counter the stereotypes. All these efforts were doomed, in my opinion, because the problem never was about biology. It was always about money and social power.

Ticknor - Body politicLater artists started to recognize that men controlled the visual representation and even the definition of women, and tried to regain control. An example is Lisa Ticknor’s “The Body Politic,” based on the idea (as one female critic said) that “Living in a female body is different from looking at it, as a man.” Unfortunately, and inevitably, the advertising and movie industries, controlled by men, immediately co-opted the new feminist art and sold it back to society as the image of the  pseudo-powerful (yet harmless) woman, nominally “liberated” but actually still under the masculine thumb.

A big move forward was Judy Chicago’s establishment of Womanhouse in 1972, an art studio and gallery by and for women. This was a small but important step because it was a move to address the real source of the feminist problem, the exclusively male gatekeeper class.

Other efforts involve the rehabilitation of so-called “women’s arts” such as quilting, needlepoint, and ceramics, although “decorative arts” remained a pejorative term in the art world.

Eva HesseThe professor rambled on for a good half hour on the thesis that “male art” tended to rectilinear forms (e.g., Saul Lewitt, Carl Andre) while “female art”  tended to more organic, biomorphic shapes. This struck me as a naïve, glib, unsupported pile of steaming horse manure (feminine shape?), but nothing could dissuade him from it. As the lecture and examples moved closer to the modern period, the professor continued to talk about “feminine art” in these ridiculous terms and in others equally absurd (such as “erotic spaces” and the patently counterfactual assertion that “women, at least, control reproduction”). He seemed incapable of questioning if there is such a thing as “feminine art” worthy of discussion. It was a historical moment, perhaps, but Ivey talked as if he, himself were still stuck in a 1970s mentality.

Cindy Sherman 1Despite my rising frustration at the lecture, I did enjoy his presentation of the work of Cindy Sherman, a photographer I have admired, and who is still working, I believe. She took pictures of herself in various costumes, settings, and “presentations,” but they were not self-portraits, she insisted. Rather, she was demonstrating how woman can assume many different forms, like chimera. These were photos of different Cindy Sherman 2subjectivities, not of one objective woman. And, I think, a poke in the eye to men, saying, “you think you control how we are represented, but actually, we control how we appear to you, so joke on you, buddy.”  It’s a wonderful, multi-layered narrative.

The theme of women (and race) as social construction was taken up by other artists, including Betye Saar, in her wonderful 1972, “The Liberation of Aunt Jemima,” and Barbara Kruger, whose mix of language and photography I think is brilliant.

Betye Saar - liberationofauntjemimaI’m a huge fan of philosopher Judith Butler and for over a decade I have been convinced that gender is entirely a social construction, so I was upset that Professor Ivey didn’t seem to embrace that view with as much enthusiasm as I have for it.  Therefore, his lecture was both stimulating and infuriating. I was so upset with his superficial and outdated views on “feminist art” that I couldn’t stay for the Q & A session at the end. At the same time, I have to hand it to him because he got to me, made me think, made me mad – and isn’t that his job as a professor?

 

 

 

December 8, 2014

Michel-Foucault-saying-power-sexThis lecture began with a survey of some “theories” of postmodern art, really just conceptualizations or angles for interpretation, collectively called, “Theory.”

One approach to interpretation is the “Repressive Hypothesis” championed by Michel Foucault in the 1980’s. This idea says that when you repress an idea in a culture, like female sexuality, an idea that was supposedly repressed in the Victorian era, then you actually give it more strength and power. Sexuality is created by dialog, and if dialog is not permitted, the topic has more force in the society. Thus, the Victorians were not sexually repressed – they just didn’t talk about sex in public, but sexuality, especially female sexuality, was very present in the society.

Today, that’s not the case. Sexual talk and imagery are omnipresent. Does it mean that sexuality has lost its power in modern society?  Who knows? It’s a flimsy idea to start with and the professor offered no follow-up on it.

Judith-Butler-Quotes-5Instead, he went on to read a list of highlights from Judith Butler’s work, “Gender Trouble.” She is a major philosopher of gender and queer studies. Her main point, of course, is that gender is entirely constructed in society. By the time you are conscious enough and self-aware enough to discuss gender, it’s too late – your ideas and attitudes are baked into your skull through the process of socialization. That’s why most people believe that gender identity is given rather than constructed.

Professor Ivey just read these sound bytes off a screen, offering no commentary on the “theory.” I got the sense that if he actually were engaged by it, he wouldn’t have made such a botch of his presentation the previous week on so-called “feminist art.”

Another “theory” is that of Roland Barthes, in the 1960’s, concerning “The Death of the Author,” an idea already broached in this course. The idea is that the intentionality of the author in literature, and the artist in art, has nothing to do with the meaning of the artistic product.  Instead, meaning is found in interaction between the work and the viewer. The author is, essentially “dead.”

Rhetorical TriangleThis is another of those flimsy ideas inexplicably taken seriously by critics and historians. Traditionally, since the time of Aristotle at least, many people conceptualize the process of art as a triangle, with the three corners representing 1. The author’s intentionality, 2. The work or art, and 3. The audience’s interpretation (for Aristotle, the three corners are Ethos, the credibility or authority of the speaker/writer; Logos, use of reason and evidence in making an argument; and Pathos, the emotional appeal to the audience.)   Knocking out one of these corners is arbitrary and unjustified, although it  transfers power to the gatekeeper class, which is perhaps why they like to imagine that the author is dead.

A more generous “theory” of why Barthes, or anybody else, would be tempted to dispose of the author’s/artist’s intentionality in consideration of artistic meaning, would be that in modern times, many people are confused by asynchronous communication – the kind that does not require the speaker and the listener to be contemporaneous. Email is asynchronous, which is its great virtue. Unlike a phone call, the messages we exchange can be sent and received by email at different (asynchronous) times.

Works of art, such as novels and paintings, are asynchronous. The author does not have to be contemporaneous with the audience in order to convey his/her creative intentionality. It is a naïve and profound mistake, yet a common one, to believe that since the author is not present to the audience, that the author doesn’t matter, or is “dead.”

HaringWhat an author says explicitly about his/her intentions in creating the work may be only marginally relevant. Humans don’t know why they do what they do half the time anyway. Still, the creative impulse (and the craft of realizing it) are human phenomena, whether or not a particular author was able to articulate his/her intentions in a way that satisfies the current audience. That is the only reason we are interested in the work in the first place – because it is a human self-expression.  Failure to understand the intersubjective context of art appreciation is a failure of “theory.”

Having perfunctorily dispensed with “theory,” without much comment, and no discussion, the professor moved on to consideration of graffiti as art. He considered subway art of the 1980’s and the art world’s attempts to “aestheticize” street art (have the gatekeepers confer legitimacy).  Some of it moved to galleries, and to arranged tagging parties. Prominent examples of “legitimate” street art were from Keith Haring and Basquiat in the 1970’s.

Chicano_Legacy-muralWhen street art was legitimized, it  lost its street cred and came to look a lot like recycled pop art (e.g., Lichtenstein). Oddly, the professor did not mention the Chicano mural movement, which did not undergo the same fate. (This course is 99.9% white and 95% male, for some reason.)

A major factor in postmodern art is “appropriation” (aka, plagiarism). Artist have always “borrowed” from other artists, but pomo artists take it as a matter of principle that a copy of a work is another standalone work of art, because they reject the natural validity of “the original.” If you take a photo of a landscape, what is the “original?” The landscape itself? And typically, a photographer will take dozens of shots, and select only one to print. Why does that selection bestow “originality” on the one shot that is printed and shown?

So pomo artist were/are fond of taking photographs of art works, or even of other photographs and displaying them as valid works of art in their own right. In some cases the “copies” seem to become more original than the source object (The “Marlboro” western art is an example).

This segued into a discussion of photography of art. Sherrie Levine took photos of other photos that appeared in books, to provoke the question of the validity of “the original.” Surely a reproduction of a photograph printed in a book cannot be considered an “original” so what’s wrong with re-photographing that published picture and calling it art?  (Other than consideration of intellectual property rights).

jeff-koons-puppygateJeff Koons was cited as an example of problematic “appropriation.”  One his sculptures was a close copy of a well-known photograph, and the photographer sued. Koons lost. The settlement was that the photographer would accept the sculpture in question as a gift. (Nice settlement! Anything by Koons is worth millions today.)

By the 1990’s photography had become “painterly,” in the sense that it self-consciously took up some of the formalisms of painting. That was important in the move to have photography reconsidered as “fine art” rather than just instrumentation.

Another movement (e.g., Richard Avedon) was to photograph ordinary people, especially the homeless and mentally ill, and others at the margins of society.  This was considered portraiture.

Wedding pix (1)A category of photography that has always perplexed me is wedding pictures. What are those about?  Everybody’s dressed up in weird costumes and engaging in very non-normal behavior and showing a lot of teeth – it’s completely contrived. Those aren’t real people, and that is not their lives. They are hiding, not showing themselves. What’s photographed is completely unnatural, and I would say, bizarre. Why would you want pictures to remember an event that was utterly contrived?

Maybe wedding photography is supposed to be the opposite of Avedon’s homeless people?  I am stumped,  and there was no opportunity in class for discussion. I should interview a wedding photographer.

I enjoyed a presentation of Jeff Wall’s work, a photographer I have long admired. He is able to capture the essence of squalor.  That’s how I’d characterize his talent. But I had not realized that his scenes were staged and manufactured, not “found.” That diminishes my respect for his “eye” but only by a little.

Photographers who manufacture a scene to be photographed (wedding photographers?) are perhaps making the point that photography is not truth. Many people seem to still believe that if they saw a picture of it, it must be real. That’s incredibly naïve, but it’s a historical holdover. I wonder if in the 19th century people felt that way about naturalistic painting (e.g., Manet’s Lunch on the Grass).

Anselm-Kiefer-nurembergThe final section of the lecture concerned contemporary German art, starting from the question, how can anything aesthetic be said after the holocaust?  Much of the art shown had a holocausty feel, such as Kiefer’s 1981 “Your Golden Hair…” and his sculptures in lead – airplanes and birds that cannot fly, books whose pages cannot be turned.

We looked at some Gerhard Richter, in which paintings were made to look like photographs, an ironic reversal of the trend in photography.

The professor’s lecture I thought focused too much on the influence of the holocaust and not enough on the art itself. For a pomo art course, where the author is supposedly dead, we should have looked at more pictures and talked less about Nazis.

But it’s all good. This class is stimulating even when it’s off-base.

 

Dec 10th, 2014

Sotheby auctionThis last lecture in the series on Postmodern Art covered “Activist Art,” aka politically motivated art, protest art.  There were several categories of activism surveyed.

Included were art works that protested against the role of big money in the art world. Prices for art work have gone sky-high even while funding for the arts has plummeted. The elite, monied class collects art not for aesthetic, historical, or philosophical value, but merely as an investment vehicle. This practice seems to grate mightily on artists who resent having success controlled by the wealthy.

It isn’t a compelling criticism to me, however. There are many cooperative art galleries that are free of big money interests. None of these were mentioned in the lecture, perhaps because the art found in them does not have the imprimatur of the “Official Gatekeepers” of what counts as first-tier art, and therefore will never be auctioned at Sotheby’s for millions. It’s still good art, though. Anybody can buy high-quality art at cooperatives, or even sometimes at street fairs. That’s where I get my art. It will never be “big-money” art, but I enjoy it, I pay the artists what I can afford, and they earn what they can.

There is an unacknowledged dichotomy between the two categories of art – “official” art that draws the big bucks, and “ordinary art” that doesn’t, but which is just as beautiful or challenging as any. The difference is unacknowledged in courses like this, perhaps because the gatekeepers (like this professor of art history) do not want to draw attention to their pernicious role in the intersection of capitalism and the art world.

Dread Scott Proper wayPolitical protest art has always been plentiful, and some examples were shown. A piece embodying the tension is Dread Scott’s, “What is the proper way to display the flag.”  In order to write your thoughts in the comment book, you have to step on a U.S. flag placed on the floor in front of the book.

Golub InterrogationLeon Golub’s “Interrogation,” from 1981 is as relevant today as it was then.

The lecture noted in some detail that Hitler, and many of his closest associates, were aspiring (failed) artists and that the Nazi movement in general was obsessed by art. However, being utterly ignorant, they defined art as sentimental idealism and banned all else as “degenerate.”

piss_christ_serrano_andres_1987A comparison was drawn to art censorship in America, and in other countries, something that seems to occur whenever ignorant politicians decide they must protect the public from indecency and “bad” art. Examples cited were from Robert Mapplethorpe’s photography and Andres Serrano’s “Piss Christ,” (1987) a crucifix displayed in a tank of urine. The professor noted that the piece is quite attractive, reminiscent of Spanish renaissance art, and if the crucifix had been suspended in a tank of beer, it would’ve been on billboards. But because it was urine (which is sterile, and which represents the purification of the blood), the piece was considered indecent. Seven of nine copies of it have been vandalized.

A serious problem with protest art is that as soon as it is placed inside a museum, it is already aestheticized, robbing it of its intensity. The museum erases the protest as soon as they give a piece the thumbs up. If it’s in a museum, it’s art, not protest.

Wilson-silver-shacklesA simple but powerful form of protest art uses the technique of juxtaposition. An example is Fred Wilson’s piece, displaying a beautiful handmade silver tea service from the 1800’s, along with a set of slave shackles.

AIDs activism in the 1980s produced a lot of art, especially poster art, protesting the government’s inaction in the face of the epidemic, and the public’s indifference.

A few examples of so-called “feminist art” were dredged up again, for example, protests concerning women’s right to control their own reproduction.

AIDS Gran FurySo what is the takeaway message behind all these examples of protest, activist art?  One is that culture is not separate from politics. Politicians recognize the power of art in shaping public ideas and try to manage that. The controversy over the Vietnam War memorial in Washington, D.C. was an example. There is no set of universal values, and people who could not appreciate abstraction insisted on (and got) another, second, memorial, a super-realist bronze representation of some soldiers. Are the people who can’t understand abstraction deficient in some way? I think so, but in America, that doesn’t matter. If you need to see a realistic representation of a soldier in order to understand that many soldiers fought and died, then you have a right to see that.

A less obvious lesson is that museums and galleries construct “art history,” by curation and gatekeeping. Art museums were compared to department stores, where you can (intellectually) “shop” for different categories and “movements” of cultural history. Even natural history museums construct the past, with dioramas that demonstrate, for example, “cave-man” families in naturalistic settings, suggesting that monogamy and the nuclear family are “given” in history. No evidence supports such a presumption.

Nizan-Shaked-Something-Out-of-NothingThis gets exactly at my objection to this lecture. While it was ostensibly a survey of the exercise of money and power on art, it systematically omitted consideration of the role of the historians, curators, collectors, and media coverage that defines what counts as “real” art, excluding most of it. Discussion of how art expresses power relations in the society, skips right over the underlying question of what counts as art in the first place. That question was displaced, by design or self-blindness.

This course has been highly stimulating, informative, and provocative. At the same time it has been infuriating for offering examples that are 99.9% white, 95% male, and 98% U.S.-centric. Perhaps those limitations are practical ones imposed by the course structure and length, but if so, the constraints should have been stated at the beginning.

There is no perfect college course. However, this one was fun and interesting, and consistently pushed my buttons, and my buttons are hard to push, so I have to give it an A.

 

 

 

Hornby – High Fidelity

highfidelityHornby, Nick. (1995). High Fidelity. New York: Riverhead Books/Penguin.

 Well-written, Non-nutritive

Imagine a character, thirty-five, who has the mind of a fifteen year-old. Would that be funny? It is mildly amusing in High Fidelity. Rob runs an obscure, used-record store that barely survives and he is obsessed with popular music. His two slacker buddies are equally obsessed, but they are only reaction characters for Rob’s rants and reflections. First-person narration is always a challenge, because nobody is interesting enough to listen to for 300 pages. Even Humbert Humbert and Sam Spade became tedious, and Rob, as a small-minded whiner, achieves that status very quickly.

His longtime girlfriend abruptly leaves him, so he makes a list of his top five most traumatic breakups. Top five lists are the main driver of the humor in the novel. Top five episodes of Cheers, top five pop records, top five worst records, top five pop songs about death, top five dance tunes, and so on, interminably. The reader sees that Laura left him because Rob is a directionless, unambitious loser, but Rob worries that it was about his sexual performance, so he obsesses about sex, and romance, and how to impress girls, and he indulges all the self-absorbed gender angst you would expect from a young teenager, except again, Rob is 35. It’s pathetic rather than funny.

I understood most of the pop culture references, but was indifferent to them. Pop culture, is by definition, light and frothy stuff, the background noise to a life. But for Rob, it is life. Someone who believes that is not likely to be reading a book like this, so by design, this novel had to fall flat.

Much of the writing is tight, well-observed, wry, and original; strong enough to pull you through the pages to the end. For example, Rob (a Brit) had sex one night with an American woman, who later unexpectedly shows up at his shop to say hello. He is surprised.

“This, it seems, is what you get for sleeping with an American, all this up-front goodwill. You wouldn’t catch a decent British woman marching in here after a one-night stand. We understand that these things are, on the whole, best forgotten. But I suppose Marie wants to talk about it, explore what went wrong; there’s probably some group counseling workshop she wants us to go to, with lots of other couples who spent a misguided one-off Saturday night together” (p. 189).

Another: Rob has dinner with a well-educated and prosperous couple.

“We eat stuff I don’t know about, and neither … comments on each bottle of wine we drink apart from the one I brought. The difference between these people and me is that they finished college and I didn’t … as a consequence, they have smart jobs and I have a scruffy job, they are rich and I am poor, they are self-confident and I am incontinent, they do not smoke and I do, they have opinions and I have lists. Could I tell them anything about which journey is the worst for jet lag? No. Could they tell me the original lineup of the Wailers? No.” (p. 199)

Overall, the writing is to be admired, and the book is worth reading for that. At the end, you feel like you ate marshmallows for dinner.

Salter – Light Years

Light YearsMrs. Dalloway Meets Emma Bovary While The Sun Also Rises.

Salter, James (1975/1995). Light Years. New York: Vintage.

If you enjoy lyrical writing, fine descriptions, acutely observed personalities, this book is for you. It’s an impressionistic portrait of two main characters, Viri and his wife, Nedra, who begin the novel married, and end it unmarried. They have children, they grow older, and they die. Along the way, they don’t face any serious challenges. There are no fires, floods, political upheavals, financial collapses, terrorist attacks, car crashes, drug addictions, career achievements, promotions, adventures, or triumphs. Nobody is curious about anything, nobody attempts anything, nobody learns, nobody changes.

Instead, Viri and Nedra are aesthetes. They care about movies, theater, literature, paintings, architecture, music, country living, high-end shopping, fine wine, and gourmet cooking. And sex, which is casual and plentiful.

Perhaps “care” is too strong a word. These characters certainly consume the arts, but they don’t study or participate in them, or produce anything more than sock puppets, scrapbooks, and line drawings. They apparently have a mountain of money to support their aesthetic, sheltered, self-absorbed and idyllic lifestyle, though the source of funds is never explained. He’s a mediocre, unknown architect in New York and she’s a housewife.

In short, the characters are not interesting or believable. They face no challenges and they reveal nothing of themselves. Instead, the third-person narrator tells us what they supposedly think, believe, and feel. Love is declared, tears are displayed, but none of it is adequately motivated. The strongest motivational thread is that both characters fear ageing. At age 34, Nedra obsesses over wrinkles. Viri worries, in his fifties, that life has passed him by. This obsession with ageing makes the characters seem even more superficial. Unfortunately, I don’t think Salter was trying to make an ironic point. They really are just vacuous characters.

I characterize the book as a fine example of prose poetry, loosely wrapped in a sentimental slice-of-life story. It’s really all about the writing and the excellent observation and phenomenology. At random:

“Life is weather. Life is meals. Lunches on a blue checked cloth on which salt has spilled. The smell of tobacco. Brie, yellow apples, wood-handled knives” (p. 25).

“In the woman who overwhelms us there must be nothing familiar. Faye was telling a story about Arnaud buying an airplane; it wouldn’t fly, she said, wasn’t that typical? …Viri tried not to stare. He was helpless at gatherings like this where the conversation was rapid and cynical, the encounters remote as at a dancing class” (p. 31).

“The walls were a faded turquoise, a curious color he no longer disliked” (p. 69)

“He wore a white cap and a ribbed shirt, pants the color of tobacco or certain perfumes, and a scarf for a belt” (p. 107).

“The book was in her lap; she had read no further. The power to change one’s life comes from a paragraph, a lone remark” (p. 161).

“Is illness an accident, or is it a kind of choice, the way love is a choice – hidden, involuntary, but sure as a fingerprint?” (p 254).

Despite very enjoyable writing like this, Salter does sometimes slip into grotesquely overwritten sentimentality, a problem that arises from trying to develop characters who lack genuine interiority. Still, on balance, the writing pulled me through to the end and I’m glad to have met James Salter.

Williams – Stoner

Stoner bookZombie Professor

Williams, John (1965). Stoner. New York: New York Review of Books, 278 pp.

This is a well-written story of an average man who lives an average life.

William Stoner, son of farmers in Missouri, goes off to college at the beginning of the 20th century, studies literature, earns a Ph.D., becomes a teacher, gets married, has a child, has a brief affair with a student, writes one mediocre book, grows old, and dies.

Throughout this ordinary life, nothing really affects him. He seems dim-witted from the start and he never changes The narrator claims he had a burning passion for English literature, but we never see that. This is not a man of passion. He’s an ordinary fellow who plods through life like a mule pulling a plow.

The writing is thoughtful and reflective, but not insightful or lyrical. It just moves slowly along, like the character.  I remember thinking, “I wonder how many more pages until he has an affair with a student?”  Sure enough. That was an episode, like many others, that was described well, but was utterly mundane, even clichéd in concept. After a spell, the affair ends, the woman moves away, and they never communicate again. The whole thing had no lasting effect on him; didn’t change his view of himself, his life, or his goals. Sure he enjoyed it, who wouldn’t? But it did not make a dent in his life. It was just something that happened. It might as well not have. The whole novel is like that.

There is a nice 40-page story in the middle of the book, where Stoner and a mean-spirited colleague lock horns over nothing (as academics are wont to do), and even though this episode is also a cliché, at least it’s presented mostly in dialog rather than narration, so it comes to life, the only section of the book that does.

Stoner married a mentally ill woman. It was clear (to me) that she was abnormal in the first scenes she was in, and sure enough, she turns out to be angry, frigid, mean, neurotic, paranoid, infantile, and delusional for the rest of the story.  Stoner just bears her meanness silently, numbly.

Why did he marry her? Because he was at that age and circumstance when the author decided the character needed to be married. I’m sure there was a timeline of rites of passage on a blackboard: Secure job, get married, buy house, have baby, make tenure… check, check, and check. The narrator asserts that the young bride was beautiful, but we never saw that. Stoner may have had a case of youthful hormones, but romantic love or signs of passion were not evident. As with everything else in his life, and even as he lies dying, Stoner staggers along his timeline, as if in a fog, thinking nothing, learning nothing,  breathing  for no reason.

Compare this fictional biography with that of “Rabbit” Angstrom, in John Updike’s novel, “Rabbit, Run.” Rabbit too, is an ordinary fellow, not particularly likeable, but he has vision, passions, desires. He does things for reasons. Things happen to him and he reacts to them. But Stoner simply endures, beginning to end, a lump  of clay so dry, nothing can make an impression on it.

The writing is careful and the descriptions are exact. There are a few moments of non-cliched poignancy. And overall, the comprehension of such an ordinary, featureless life does make you reflect on the meaning of your own life. Am I just another anonymous William Stoner, destined to leave this earth with no trace of ever having existed? So the novel does have some virtue.

Why do so many people like this book and this character? I think they misinterpret Stoner’s numbness for some kind of noble stoicism, as if he had “risen above” life’s outrageous slings and arrows. But he didn’t rise above. He didn’t even rise up to.

Winter & Martin – Beethoven Quartet Companion

BeethQuartCompMusical Revelations

Winter, Robert, & Martin, Robert (Eds.) (1994). The Beethoven Quartet Companion. Los Angeles: University of California Press, 300 pp.

There are few finer pleasures in life than to listen to a recording of Beethoven’s string quartets, while reading a book like this. Reading the book seems to flow in a different channel of the mind than the music does, yet each enriches the other.

I bought this book in preparation for a series of four lectures I signed up for at the University of Arizona. Those start about a month from now, but note well, people who say that the sole, or main purpose of a college education is preparation for the job market: You are wrong. There’s more to it than that. The higher purpose of education is to deepen one’s understanding of life in ways that are simply unimaginable to the ignorant.

This book is roughly divided into two parts. The first is a series of essays about the history and significance of the sixteen quartets, including information about Beethoven’s life and the culture of Vienna around 1800. This material is well-presented and fascinating for a non-musician like me. I learned, for example, that one reason the sixteen quartets are traditionally classified into early, middle and late clusters is because of changing economics and demographics in Vienna during that period. Just prior to 1800, audiences expected to recognize the classical structures of Haydn and Mozart, but by the early 1820’s, Napoleon had invaded, the aristocrats were broke, and the expectations of the listening audience were entirely different. Add to these changes, advances in instrument technology, which affected what could be played and what an audience could hear.

The three periods of the quartets are stunningly different. You can hear this clearly in the Emerson String Quartet’s excellent recording of sample quartets from each period, “Key to the Quartets” (Deutsche Gramophone). I was so taken by the mental, emotional, and spiritual differences between the periods that I once played this recording to a college class in developmental psychology to illustrate, in a non-verbal way, the stages of adult psychological development. Alas, the students could not grasp the idea, and now I realize it takes some time to learn how to listen to the quartets. You can’t just spring them on somebody. I was young.

After reading this book, I see that there were many changes, historical, political, economic, and technical, that contributed to the sound of the quartets in each of the three periods. Knowing that, I now have serious questions about another favorite recording, “A State of Wonder,” Glenn Gould playing the complete Goldberg Variations in 1955 and again in 1981 (Sony Classical). I have always heard the two recordings as representing the exuberance of youthful genius and the knowing wisdom of maturity. After reading this book about Beethoven’s string quartets, I’m no longer sure individual psychology ever tells the whole story of musical evolution.

The last two-thirds of this book are descriptive notes on each of the sixteen quartets. These include excerpts from the scores for illustration of the points being made. I am not able to read music well enough to appreciate those, to my regret, but the descriptive and analytic comments are highly accessible even to the non-musician and will enrich the listening experience.

The book also includes fascinating photographs, of period instruments, prominent musical figures of the time, letters, and even Beethoven’s original, incredibly messy, but astonishing, hand-inked sketches for some quartets. There is a very useful glossary of musical terms in the back, along with an index. I am very much looking forward to the U of A’s series of lectures on this topic.

Zero Dead Bodies

Body outlineI just completed the first draft of my first entirely non-genre novel. It’s 78,000 words, and there’s not a single dead body in it. That makes me nervous, even though that was my intention from the start. As I store the document in a backup folder, I wonder, was there any point to all those words?

I look over my outline and my list of chapters, and I believe there is a coherent story line. I haven’t even tried yet to articulate it in one or two sentences, but I don’t get the feeling that this novel was a random walk in the woods. It has a beginning, a middle, and an end, so that gives me some confidence that I had something in mind as I wrote it.

Plenty of stuff happens. A guy lost his job, his wife left him, taking the kids, he became obsessed by a dream he couldn’t fulfill. There were two romantic relationships, both valid, though only one stuck. There was a secret formula discovered, then lost, then found again. There was an evil villain, mysteriously motivated, but not a moustache-twirler. There were shadowy thugs and one guy even got beat up a little. He wasn’t badly hurt.

Enough stuff happened, I hope, that the characters had opportunity to reveal who they are, and enough stuff to drive alternating peaks and valleys of dramatic tension.  So it should be a readable novel. I have this nagging doubt that it’s mundane and boring.

I’ve never done a novel without the crutch of genre’s exogenous tension. Whodunit?  Everybody wants to know that. That kind of drama is baked into the cake in a mystery. In this non-genre novel, the stakes are high for several characters, but not baked in. They had to be shown and detailed in every case. Did I do that?  Right now, I’m not confident.

It’s a first draft, very rough, and when I read it again in a few months, I’ll be better able to assess whether it is a solid, character-driven story, as I intended, or merely a long description of some vague characters walking around in a fog.

Call it Done!

Finis2This is the latest post in my series documenting my writing process. Since returning from a writing conference in July, I have focused all my attention on rewriting a novel finished some time ago, called Being Ruby. I did this to accommodate much worthwhile feedback the manuscript received at the conference. I reconceptualized it, changed the voice from first- to third-person, remotivated the characters, simplified the plot, and radically straightened out the timeline. I gave it a better title, too.

That rewrite took only six weeks, albeit 6 hours a day, 7 days a week. The result, at 73,000 words, is about as good as I can make it. I could go through it again and strengthen my nouns and verbs and deepen my descriptions. I could fuss with it forever. That’s the problem of diminishing returns. So I simply declared a state of doneness. Time to send it out!

I spent an intense week writing my query letter and synopsis. The best advice for writing a query letter, I believe, is at www.agentquery.com. I followed their instructions pretty closely, although it took a long time to put my head into the agent’s point of view. The agent wants to know, at a glance, “Could I sell this story?”

The writer’s point of view is not so focused. Ask any writer who’s just finished a manuscript, “What’s this book about?” You’ll get a long, rambling answer. “Well, it’s sort of a love story, and it takes place in France, but it’s also about social class and manners, and key moments of history, and there’s a mystery element too.”

I realized, that for an author, the question, “What’s it about?” is not the right one for writing the query letter. The correct question is, “What happens in this book that is so interesting, anybody would want to read more?”  Intention, subtlety, nuance, subtext, subplots, allegories, themes – all that goes out the window.  “What happens” can be a statement of the plot, but better, a statement of what ordeal the main character had to go through. You have one sentence to say what happens. Here’s mine:

A young woman with inexplicable memory blackouts discovers she has a frightening alternate personality and doubts her own sanity, but when her long-lost brother returns to reveal a secret from their childhood, she finds a way to exploit her divided self to take revenge on the uncle who destroyed her life and her brother’s.

Is that a good hook? I have no idea. I will know in a few weeks if anybody bites.

The synopsis was also extremely difficult to write, and there’s no good advice out there  on how to do it. 300 pages had to be reduced to one and a half. The key move for me was again to put myself into the agent’s head. Stories can, and often do, take many wild turns. You could start with a love story, and find you’re in a pirate adventure. The agent needs to see the overall flow. So I listed the three or four main challenges the character faced and turned those into linked paragraphs, finishing with how everything ended up. And you do have to give away the ending in the synopsis. The agent does not want any surprises.

Next, I had to find a list of agents. There are many lists, including:

www.agentquery.com

http://www.pw.org/literary_agents

www.publishersmarketplace.com

Predators and Editors

http://www.writersdigest.com/editor-blogs/guide-to-literary-agents

http://www.querytracker.net/

The first two on this list seemed the most valuable places to start. Taking advice from many online sources, I decided to query 10 agents at a time, wait for the rejections, then do ten more. The idea is that I might get actual feedback (as opposed to merely no response, which is the most common form of rejection), and any feedback is better than nothing. Based on what happens, I might decide to revise my query letter and/or synopsis.

Selecting agents to query is a tedious process. I selected my search terms and got a list of 89 agents who matched them (e.g., genres = literary, commercial, and thriller; agent accepts email queries; agent is accepting ANY queries right now).

For each result, I had to click open the agent’s data and then the agency’s web site. An agency might have 1 or a dozen agents. Some want what I have, some don’t. I make a list. I enter their names on a tracking spreadsheet I made up in Excel. You can only query one agent at a given agency, at a time, so I chose a likely match. Based on the information they reveal online, it’s like reading tea leaves, but you can definitely rule out some, because of a narrow focus, for example.

Then I have to read the submission guidelines. All agents want the query letter, but only some want the synopsis. Some, but not all want some sample pages, from three to 50 pages. A few want an author bio. Whatever they want, I assemble into an email and shoot it off.

At conferences and in magazines, agents always emphasize that querying authors must “do their research,” which means, at least, read their agency’s web page, the agent’s statement of interest, and look to see if the agent has represented any books similar to yours.  They also recommend that you read some of the books they have previously sold.

Well, it’s a good idea to read the agency web site and the agent’s statement of interest, but I can’t learn anything from looking at the list of books they represent. Usually it is an extremely eclectic mix that tells me nothing. Agents are opportunists. The past does not predict the future. So forget that.

Agents also commonly say they are deeply offended if a query does not address them with a proper salutation. I believe they all would agree to “Your Majesty,” but I find the tone of such complaints off-putting. Of course everyone wants to be treated with courtesy and respect, but when an agent tells me I should read her Facebook page to learn that she loves dogs, and then I should mention dogs in my query letter (“Hey! I like dogs too!”) my sense is that the relationship is all wrong from the start.

The author manufactures the magic, and need not pander to any agent. So I don’t insert “personal” notes in my query material. Fundamentally it is an economic relationship. I’ve got goods; you want ‘em or not?

I’ve enjoyed the last week or so of finding suitable potential agents and querying them. Yes, it’s hard work, but compared to creating something out of nothing, it’s relaxation therapy. Now I must wait about a month to see if any fish take the bait. Meanwhile, I can go back to other projects, where something must be squeezed out of nothing.

UPDATE TWO MONTHS LATER

I have now sent my query letter out to 60 agents,  about 10 a week for two months. One agent requested a partial and one requested the full manuscript.  Needless to say, I was thrilled. Nevertheless, both ended up declining to represent the book.

Of the 60 queries, 20 resulted in polite, written notes declining the offer, a 33% response rate, which I think is above average, based on conversations with my friends. I take that to mean that the query is considered serious, worthy of at least the time to email a form rejection.  The other 40 queries resulted in utter silence, the cruelest form of rejection, as if I didn’t exist.

Even though I am fully aware this is a numbers game, getting rejected 60 times in a row takes an emotional toll. Each time, I plunge into self-doubt. Maybe the book really is no good. Maybe I am delusional. Maybe I don’t have what it takes to be a writer. Those depressing thoughts last only for an hour or so, but there’s no denying that rejection is not easy to take. But it’s part of the normal process, I tell myself, so I soldier on.

I re-read the query letter, for the umpteenth time, trying to see what agents see. Why do they not see the value? This is an interesting story, competently told, and they should be able to sell it easily. What’s missing? I decided to rewrite the letter, making it a little longer (always a risk) in order to reveal more about the characters and the plot to suggest what treasures are buried. Here is the new opening paragraph, now more than one sentence:

“College student Pam Dix is terrified by inexplicable memory blackouts linked to lapses into a frightening alternate personality, but when her long-lost brother returns and resurrects memories of childhood sexual abuse by an uncle, she makes a risky decision to exploit her divided self to take revenge. She learns to consciously invoke ‘Ruby,’ her feared alternate self, to accomplish what Pam Dix cannot.”

I’ve given the character a name, hoping to make a better connection. I’ve hinted at her age, to help think about marketing. I’ve been explecit about childhood sexual abuse, which I had shied away from mentioning, for fear of frightening the timid. I’ve tried to suggest a more Jekyll-and-Hyde formula than before.

The subsequent paragraph develops more detail on the character and plot structure. A final paragraph wraps it up. My word count went from 185 to 316, and I’m worried about that. Agents have extremely limited attention spans.

I’ll be sending the revised letter out this week. I report these changes here to illustrate how it is possible to “interpret the silence” of continual rejection, and why it is a good idea to send out queries in small batches, to allow opportunity for such learning and revision.

I have also signed up for a Writer’s Digest conference in which attendees are invited to submit their query letter to an expert for critique (for a price, of course). That will provide me with professional feedback that hopefully will help tune up the letter further.

 

Creativity And Consciousness

black holeCreativity and Consciousness

Adams, W.A. (July, 2014). Creativity and Consciousness. RoSE – Research on Steiner Education Vol.5 No.1 2014. ISSN 1891-6511 (online at http://www.rosejourn.com/index.php/rose/article/view/187/198).

In this article, I proposed that creativity is a natural phenomenon, part of the very structure and function of consciousness. It’s not a skill that’s learned, not a genetic talent, but part of the definition of consciousness.

In order to make that argument, I provided an analysis of the smallest unit of consciousness, the quantum of consciousness, so to speak. I drew that analysis from my 2012 book, Scientific Introspection: A Method For Investigating the Mind (see http://billadamsphd.net/) .

I described the tiniest, irreducible atom of consciousness as a repeating cycle. Imagine two circles,  a few inches apart. One is subjectivity, which contains our sense of self. The other is objectivity, a thing with no sense of self. The action is that subjectivity wants to “eat” objectivity, converting it into itself, a thing with a sense of self. When subjectivity does that, it is satisfied, for a moment at least. Then the cycle repeats. That is the smallest possible unit of consciousness.

Subjectivity reaches beyond itself, always searching for objectivity it can consume. That is what drives subjectivity, basically a kind of curiosity, a desire to know the other, to consume that which is alien. That is what makes it go. That drive is what makes us go. At bottom then, consciousness is creatively curious, motivated to enlarge itself by knowing whatever is alien.

The editors of the journal liked this idea, but said, basically, “How do you know all this stuff?”  So I had to write a section on methodology, explaining how I came to discover that creativity is at the foundation of consciousness. The short answer is, introspection.  I explain that introspection is a kind of empiricism, not incompatible with scientific empiricism. Scientific introspection, as I envision it, involves meditation for examination of the structure of consciousness. I extracted that material also from my book, Scientific Introspection.

The whole article is extremely compressed, jamming decades worth of research and a book full of writing into a few thousand words. Writing it was a difficult exercise in deciding what to say and what to leave out. I think the result is very dense, what the journal editor kindly described as “concise.” Somebody might read it. Somebody might understand it.

Writing this article was an exercise I’d like to take much farther: to translate my most theoretical and philosophical works, which are virtually impenetrable, into highly accessible creative nonfiction. I don’t think this article was successful in that regard, but showed me how far I have to go.